Thanks so much to whoever gave me more paid LJ time! I hope you are not disappointed that I have made Brian into a vampire. If it's any consolation, I really don't plan to do it again, and I do plan to write more Joke this weekend.
I can't believe that
seperis managed to get me to write a vampire cutting porn snippet, but (
uh...she did. )
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but I'm all for more "Joke".
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Love *this*.
Brian stared at the cut, fascinated, then licked it tentatively, and Justin shivered, and was suddenly unimaginably hard, and he knew that touching the inside of his arm was going to make him hard now for the rest of his life.
See, Justin *always* knows how to get Brian's undivided attention. *g*
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Yes. And he didn't even have to take off his clothes, though now that I'm picturing naked!Justin in an alley I'm starting to think it has potential...
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I want that story.
I *want to read that story*.
*hopeful*
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Me too! Why don't you go write it? *big grin*
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::shudder::
LOVED this snippet. TBC, perhaps?!?! ::bats eyelashes:
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Well, I already knew I liked vampires in other fandoms. I just didn't know it could transfer over.
As rikkrp said, I do kind of have a way I picture the rest of it, but I don't think I'll ever write it out because it's kind of depressing and is totally like a fic in a different fandom, Modus Vivendi, which is an absolutely beautifully haunting story. I picture the dynamic that would develop between Brian and Justin here as being similar to the dynamic that develops in that fic. I see the rest of the story like this ( ... )
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I agree. I actually find the cutting hot too, which probably says disturbing things about me. I keep trying to tell myself that it's not about the cutting so much as about picturing Brian wandering after some guy at Babylon and then suddenly raising his head to sniff the air, but I think it's the cutting.
The werewolf thing reminds me of some TS fic where Jim turned into a panther and I think I am still scarred from having read that.
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Yeah. It's almost Pavlovian or something--we're trained to respond to them.
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I might like that dynamic a tad too much. Of course, I also like the reciprocity, that Brian wants Justin, not just some warm body. In my romantic little black heart, both this snippet and Jenn's story end with Brian turning Justin, and the two of them hunting the night, unstoppable and gorgeous.
Of course, this got me thinking about vamp!Justin and mortal!Brian and how that would play out, how that would appeal to Brian's self-destructive urges and how it would suddenly be him fighting for Justin's attention. Pretty little dark god with his white skin shining under the lights of Babylon, with his huge, hypnotic eyes and his sinuous body and his beautiful smile full of sharp, sharp teeth.
Hmmm....
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Yes, I think that's the dynamic that I like. I have to picture this during first season. Jenn manages to twist hers to be post 3, I think, but for me the dynamic I'm imagining only works back in S1.
Of course, this got me thinking about vamp!Justin and mortal!Brian and how that would play out, how that would appeal to Brian's self-destructive urges and how it would suddenly be him fighting for Justin's attention.
How would Brian fight for Justin's attention? I can't really picture Brian doing much more than a lot of artful posing, but damn, he would probably be pretty good at artful posing.
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But if Brian really, really wanted the attention of someone who wasn't inclined to give it to him, how would he go about that? What type of predator would Justin be? (Gender doesn't matter, we're both predators... *GAG*)
I guess what it comes down to, is how would Brian play prey?
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