Comments | jooseboxx: GLEE: Darkest Before the Dawn

jooseboxx

GLEE: Darkest Before the Dawn

Oct 21, 2011 11:30

Title: Darkest Before the Dawn [part two]
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Not mine. No money. No affiliation.

( He knew that Finn did some really weird stuff when they had their 'spats' as his mother used to call them, but his stuff was always way less attention grabbing than Puck's so it had never really been brought up. )

!glee, *ensemble, *sarah puckerman, *kurt hummel, *carole hudson-hummel, *noah puckerman, #kurt/puck, *burt hummel, *finn hudson, :season 2, -r

Comments 48

lil_miss_choc October 21 2011, 13:10:54 UTC

I loved this! There were so many moments that I wanted to punch Finn - you captured his character perfectly!

jooseboxx October 21 2011, 22:58:59 UTC

Thank you! It was a thin line between making him the 'bad guy' and pure Finn bashing. So, I'm glad there wasn't much bashing.

searisme October 21 2011, 13:48:58 UTC

This is gorgeous beyond belief. I loved reading it.

jooseboxx October 21 2011, 22:59:20 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.

wearemagnetised October 21 2011, 15:03:25 UTC

urgh!!!!! *hits Finn for being a huge douche*
I loved loved loved this. Your Noah is sweet and amazing. The relationship between Puck and Kurt is timed wonderfully and doesn't feel rushed at all.
Definitely bookmarking this!

debris_k October 21 2011, 18:34:09 UTC

Exactly what they said. *nodnod*

jooseboxx October 21 2011, 23:00:58 UTC

TY ♥

duochan_maxwell October 23 2011, 17:57:17 UTC

This. Was. Too. Awesome. Agree with above comments *nodnodnod*

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david_of_oz October 21 2011, 15:35:53 UTC

Perfect perfection is perfect. This Finn is a total douchenozzle but all the characterizations are spot on. Beautifully conceived and executed. Shall there be more or is this finishing here? (it feels nicely rounded off and finished, but I could always read more if there was any...)

jooseboxx October 21 2011, 23:01:45 UTC

No. It's done! FINITO! No more! END OF.
Don't tempt me.

I am glad douchenozzle-ness was executed well.

raving_liberal October 21 2011, 15:56:16 UTC

This was so sweet. I loved Carole being bulldog!mom and laying it out that Puck was NOT doing that again!

jooseboxx October 21 2011, 23:02:10 UTC

Carole is epicness of epic. ♥
She lays the law!