Second Chance

[jojothecr]

Title: Second Chance

Fandom: Queer as Folk

Characters: Brian & Justin

Summary: 2.20
..."I don't want to go, don't you understand? I don't want him to give me what you can't. I want you to give me what you think you can't give me."

Disclaimer: Yes, they are mine, don't you know?

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Comments

[eva213]

Wow, thank you.
To je ten nejhezčí dárek, který dnes můžu dostat, protože to není nic, co se dá koupit. Moc děkuju, udělala jsi mi fakt velkou radost. :-)

[jojothecr]

You're welcome :)

Doufám, že je to aspoň trochu to, co jsi kdysi chtěla číst. Vlastně tam není moc změn, od toho, co jsi to četla naposledy. Ale je to konečně kompletní a corrected. :)

Enjoy your day! *kisses* *hugs*

kraása

[alfred004]

Jééééé, to bylo hééézhý. Zamačkávám slzu a vrhám se do pracovního procesu:-)) Takových povídek víc a víc!

Re: kraása

[jojothecr]

Jééé, čeština! :D

Doufám, že ta slza byla opravdu jen jedna, hrozně nerada přivádím lidi k slzám. Tak ať se Ti v pracovním procesu daří :)

Díky moc!

[kari77]

Oh, wow. I love, love, love it!!! I'm glad you didn't give up on this story. It's so moving and full of painful truths for Justin and Brian. *sniffles* Missed your take on those two.
I wished ep. 220 would have played out the way you described it here.

The three words, which portray everything he doesn’t believe in. He never had a reason to believe in them. What does he know about love? Hell knows if he understands what love is. He doesn’t know what he feels. He has no idea what the feeling, which makes him want to ask Justin to stay, is but he’s sure that the three simple words can’t describe it.
That's so beautiful and true to Brian. And he's wrong: if there ever was a person understanding the concept of love, it was Brian.

Justin protests weakly, losing this argument to the truth he hadn’t realized.
Thanks for bringing that up. Justin was such a brat about the whole Vermont-trip.

“You want me to give you a reason for staying with me?” Brian wonders confusedly. “If you can’t find one, then I really have no idea why you were

[jojothecr]

Wow, thank you very much for your kind words, Kari. I really wasn't sure about this story at all, so I'm very glad you like it. :)

I really like this scene in the show, because it's full of emotions, but I still think it should have ended differently. Better, of course ;)

Justin was such a brat about the whole Vermont-trip.
Exactly... I still don't understand why Justin was acting this way. I mean, he was very young, of course, but in other situations he acted very maturely. It just seems to me like a kind of lame motive for their break up. Basically, this was the moment when they relationship had begun to go the wrong way. Ian was...just a patch.
Okay now, do I make a sense?

[kari77]

You make perfect sense, as usual. *hugs* And I couldn't agree more.

[jojothecr]

Oh, glad to hear :)
*hugs back*

[nyrak20]

Fantastic!!!!
I loved this!!!

[jojothecr]

Wow! Thank you much!

[msv713]

Absolutely beautiful and so believable. That would have been if the series had done it this way. What a way for Brian to "tell" Justin he loves him - a trip to Paris. Perfect!

[jojothecr]

Absolutely beautiful and so believable.
So glad to hear that :)

Yes, Paris... my big, big dream. *sings: I'd like to see Paris in the Spring*

Thank you!

[crazyevildru]

this was just too amazing for words!! i can't believe it! this was just gorgeous and everything i wanted to see in that scene! justin fighting for him!

absolutely gorgeous!

[jojothecr]

I can't believe you like it so much. :) I really wasn't satisfied and I was, in fact, quite desperate of this whole thing.

Thank you very much!