Stolen Innocence

[jojothecr]

Title: Stolen Innocence

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Comments

[malli_]

so say, so beautiful! You're amazing with words. Thank you for posting ♥

[jojothecr]

Thank you much.

[kari77]

Oh, that's so achingly sad and rather beautiful, rich imagery at the same time.

You sit still, possibly breathing
Very powerful. It's like Brian can't feel himself anymore, disconnected, because he feels too much.

singing the sweet, corny song, which you’re sure will always ring painfully in your ears.
It's what this song does to me too. :-(

You played with Death and the karma now strikes back
So many wonderful lines in your ficlet, and this is one of them.

You pray even when you don't believe in God, now even less than before.
Perfect last line. Says so much about his upbringing, his belief, and how much he already loved Justin, even back then.

Thanks so much.

[jojothecr]

Thank you much for the nice comment. I'm happy you liked that.

Yeah, the song is very powerful, still makes me shiver.

[moongirl24]

Wow, this is so heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time. Brilliantly written! :)

[jojothecr]

Thank you very much!

[duffy_60]

Brilliant. I love the insight that Karma has now come to claim her prize because Brian deprived her of his soul. Wonderful!

[jojothecr]

Oh, thank you much!

[wouldbedorothy]

Very nice... *sigh* I can't get enough of that time!

[jojothecr]

Thank you