Stolen Innocence

Dec 14, 2007 15:22

Title: Stolen Innocence

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✎ fic, ✗ fic - qaf

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calanthe42 December 15 2007, 14:27:25 UTC
Simply lovely. Wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing your talent.

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jojothecr December 15 2007, 18:27:50 UTC
Thank you very much.

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bego82 December 15 2007, 16:33:23 UTC
well it´s fantasti realte for feelings of brian in this sadly moments. I really like this!!!

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jojothecr December 15 2007, 18:28:15 UTC
Thank you

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eva213 December 15 2007, 17:35:11 UTC
Glad to see this fic here finally. Moc moc pěkný, ale to není pro tebe nic novýho ode mě. :-))

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jojothecr December 15 2007, 18:29:44 UTC
Thanks

Možná že nic novýho, ale vždycky to potěší :-)

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anno53 December 15 2007, 21:04:05 UTC
You're writing style is so powerful ... you captured Brian's mood and anguish so perfectly. Thank you for sharing it! :)

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jojothecr December 16 2007, 01:03:26 UTC
Thank you for this nice comment.

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ladybugkay December 16 2007, 05:16:47 UTC
Haunting and lovely, especially the part about Brian waiting to see if the angels will come to take Justin away.

One little typo I want to point out: in the last paragraph, you forgot the 'h' in 'anguish.'

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jojothecr December 16 2007, 10:51:22 UTC
Oh yeah, I can see that now. Thanks!

And thank you for the nice comment.

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