When We Were Kings (Part Five: Tired Eyes, Maybe You've Seen too Much)

Dec 06, 2016 22:04

Part Four

Pairing:  HimUp
Rated:  PG13
Length:  3.5K

Tired eyes maybe you’ve seen too much
Tired heart every end has a start
If you find yourself in trouble
Falling off to the track
Would you come back?

- (X)

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zelo, himchan, himup, jongup, himlo

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anonymous December 7 2016, 11:13:46 UTC
OW MY HEART OW OW OW

Seriously, I don't even know how you do it, but your writing makes me feel SO MUCH. My heart was actually POUNDING when Himchan walked into the room knowing Yongguk was there. Their friendship is so important and aifweoijeiej efiefi i don't even know how to deal with that scene; it was perfect. Hell, even that moment Himchan heard Yongguk's voice in the background on the phone--the tension and like the LONGING and just holy shit holy shit.

I am so nervous for this wedding. I need this Himup reunion, like, yesterday, but I'm so scared of how it's gonna go. I really really want Himchan to be able to deal with it without needing his pills. fuck, we don't even know if Jongup's single, fuck aifwejfweioheiwhfiewj

Dude it's so early here and I'm already an emotional wreck. Really really loving this, in case that wasn't obvious xD Can't wait for more!

L

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jojo_kim December 7 2016, 19:26:50 UTC
Thank you!
I was kind of worried about the BangHim scene because it was so intense writing it and I was like, well what the hell am I going to do when he sees Jongup for the first time??
I still have to work that out... 0_0
The HimUp reunion is taking place next chapter I promise!

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soft_wallnuts December 8 2016, 01:47:56 UTC
I was just sitting here, enjoying how their shared past was bleeding into the words between Himchan, Junhong and Yongguk and didn't see that flashback at the end coming, at all. All the himup makes my heart hurt so good. I'm so anxious for the moment present-day Jongup finally makes his appearance in the story. That naked regret at the end of the flashback part... ugh. Hurts so good ( ... )

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jojo_kim December 8 2016, 19:07:37 UTC
Thank you so much!
Haha I love daddy Guk so much here. If I ever wanted to write Yongguk/OC then this would so be the version I would go with. He probably stays up all night watching his kid sleep and has one of those wallets where you open it and the picture sleeve spills down to the floor. He will be such a good daddy <3

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*sits in my corner staring at the wall* jihoonlover85 December 8 2016, 02:51:31 UTC
Yongguk....he was able to see Yongguk again...and they made up and hugged and omg I cried I swear and I'm glad Junhong had that idea cause I think it's a great one that he isn't overwhelmed with seeing everyone all at once and Daehyun wanted to see him too and just I am so happy that he held on and stayed in rehab and god I hope he doesn't have any relapses or setbacks when he sees Jongup again

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Re: *sits in my corner staring at the wall* jojo_kim December 8 2016, 19:08:18 UTC
He'll see Jongup next chapter ;) No promises on the breakdown. :D

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