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jo19844_twfic

Difficulty 1/1

Jun 23, 2009 12:57

TITLE: Difficulty 1/1 -
prompt #002 on my FIC 100 prompt table
Synopsis: Ianto Jones is having a little difficulty with sleep. (a little ianto angst)
Rating: R
Spoiler(s): slight s2 finale spoiler
Pairing: Ianto/Jack. (of course)
a/n - had a little eddit os my muse pointed something out to me and she was right. The part of which she was refering to ( Read more... )

fic prompt, difficulty

Comments 13

hawkeyefreak72 June 23 2009, 16:15:54 UTC

D'awww. That ending was perfect, as was the whole fic.

luvinthe88and20 June 23 2009, 16:27:16 UTC

Wonderfully written piece.

Poor messed up boys.

erin_giles June 23 2009, 16:37:28 UTC

This is a great look at Jack and Ianto's relationship and so very in character for both of them. Also you can really feel how sleep deprived Ianto is - brilliant portrayal of the frustration you feel when you get that way too. Great fic!

thrace_adams June 24 2009, 02:21:45 UTC

Oh wow. This was gorgeous, and hot, and romantic, and happy. Well done.

estarcollector June 24 2009, 04:02:08 UTC

Love this; glad to see writing from you again! As a lifelong insomniac, I SO sympathize with Ianto in this. I also like how you have him take Jack to task. Let's face it, Jack IS selfish and doesn't often "get" that other people can be a bit fragile. I honestly think he means well though, especially where his Ianto is concerned, and so I think you captured that perfectly.

Plus, your Ianto is always brilliant. The image of him sleepy and rumpled at the beginning is just....*melts*