A Quiet Thing (1/1)

Mar 05, 2009 05:22

Title: A Quiet Thing (1/1)
Rating: K
Characters: Rose Tyler, Peter Carlisle
Disclaimer: Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of BBC, are are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary: Rose finds Peter after a long night at work.
Notes: Inspired by swankkat.

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carlisle, year 7, rose

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heather916 March 5 2009, 17:11:16 UTC
I had to chuckle a bit at the timing of this, as I was so stressed last night after work that I, too, took a bath and promptly fell asleep in it. :) I know I've said it before, but I absolutely adore these quiet moment fics - they're the mortar of the relationship and such a joy to read.

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jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 16:11:59 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad to hear you found the bath to be as soothing a thing as Peter did!

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wildwinterwitch March 5 2009, 17:17:22 UTC
This story unfurled in front of my inner eye like a film. I could actually *see* them. Your descriptions left me purring and made up for my crappy day.

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jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 16:13:04 UTC
*hugs* I'm sorry you had such a terrible day!

As for the imagery--it's a rare treat to have an actual *image* upon which to base a story. And when the image is so well-rendered, it makes my job infinitely easier to do.

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anonymous March 5 2009, 17:53:55 UTC
Hi! Anonymous Again!

Very calming and sweet :) Peter has made me extremely sleepy now. AND I HAVE A TRUCK LOAD OF PAPERWORK TO DO FOR TOMAORROW. Isn't Peter sweet. Bless him, i just want to jump into this story and give him a cuddle :) I thought the way you compared him to a cat was unbelievingly adorable. I also love the fact that Peter stood up to whoever hurt him. *growls* first he's beaten up (no doubts there are more times) then he's shot, i tell you its quite a good thing your BRILLIANT stories aren't real or i'd be an a rampage after anyone who's ever hurt him:) I mean who wants to hurt Peter. *sniffs*

Veeeeeerrrrry sweet :) There both adorable and calm:)

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jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 16:14:57 UTC
Hello!

A Truckload of Paperwork?! UGH. You have my sympthies on that. But...well, Peter no doubt has to slog through loads of paperwork, as well, so imagine how he might handle it. Sniping and snarking, and throwing paperclips at Elias as Elias shoots rubber bands at him... ;)

Peter's job is a dangerous one, even when he does everything right. But he and Elias look out for each other, which helps them avoid injury many, many times, and really Peter's got a bit of a lucky streak. So he'll be alright. *g*

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jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 16:17:01 UTC
*glares at water heater* Did you have any water warmer than "tepid" today?

Rose and Peter are absolutely mad for each other, of course--and what is so wonderful about that is that they don't necessarily *say* it all the time, but they *always* demonstrate it. Even after they've rowed.

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Prin AQT Comments 1 of 1 principia March 5 2009, 18:22:19 UTC
He’d been pushing himself hard on his latest case-the murder of a young orphan--and the lack of anyone in the neighbourhood seeming to care only fuelled Peter and Elias’s determination to find out who’d deemed the lad a liability.

*sigh*

She stiffened as she heard an odd noise in the house; she closed her eyes, straining, and heard it again. It sounded like it was coming from the en-suite, and she slowly sat up, her eyes skipping first to the hall door-wide open, the hall beyond dark-then to the door to the en-suite.

It had better be Peter, or someone’s about to get the s**t beat out of them.

She tripped over a discarded jumper-Peter’s, without question-and felt a small smile flicker across her face.

You can tell she’s missing him, when laundry in the middle of the floor prompts smiling.

Picking it up, she gave it a quick once-over to make sure it was clean enough, and slowly pulled it on as she moved to the door to the en-suite.Has she made the mistake of donning of his shirts before when there were good reasons she oughtn’t ( ... )

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Re: Prin AQT Comments 1 of 1 jlrpuck_fic March 6 2009, 17:37:18 UTC
It had better be Peter, or someone’s about to get the s**t beat out of them.

Heh. Could you imagine the poor unsuspecting burglar who came up against Rose? He’d be in for quite a surprise.

You can tell she’s missing him, when laundry in the middle of the floor prompts smiling.

*nods* Very, very true. Once he’s back awake, and has been welcomed home properly, she’ll be reminding him to pick up his clothes *g*

Has she made the mistake of donning of his shirts before when there were good reasons she oughtn’t have done?

I think she has, at least once. Perhaps in the middle of summer, when he’s been stuck outside for a while.

Go get the camera now Rose!

Mmmm. Yes.

It’s that space-age comfy tub that’s doing it, man.

Exactly right. Peter loves that tub, dearly. And not just because he and Rose have shagged each other in it.

Elias and Peter lose a bet and end up having to go as Mungojerry and Rumpleteaser? XD

Bwah!

I can just see the completely offended expression on his face as the wind betrays him…Hedgehog!Peter, indeed ( ... )

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Re: Prin AQT Comments 1 of 1 principia March 6 2009, 18:21:10 UTC
Heh. Could you imagine the poor unsuspecting burglar who came up against Rose? He’d be in for quite a surprise.

Or if Peter had brought Elias home with him for some reason? Egads!

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