Ack! You can't leave it THERE! I love all three of those characters.
*runs in circles* *frets*
I also now want to kick Kat and disassociate her with Daughtry because of her attitude, lol.
And it was so nice to get some backstory on the Kelly situation because I know it was bothering Cook (and it makes a ton of sense which is lovely as well.)
That party certainly was...lively. But I like that things appear to be working themselves out, and I don't know if I can't wait to know what happens with everyone because I'm suffiently wrapped up in the lives of all these characters :)
Fitting in the period slang (and the older slang via Joel) was one of the most fun parts of writing the story! Besides, my uncles and father actually talked like that.
Love your toddler analogy! They are all a little over-stressed, and the sudden release pushes things further than it might have ordinarily.
I lack the capability of coherence, as it's late and I've had a long day, but I was totally willing to try and then there's that dreadful cliffhanger!!! And now I must go have a lie down.
Cook cuffing Robinson over the head was hilarious, I hope he managed to talk him into going after Kim.
And as per usual, your Ryan/Simon parts just slay me, they are just so wonderful together, and I laughed out loud when Simon found Ryan´s jumper sexy, hehe.
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*runs in circles* *frets*
I also now want to kick Kat and disassociate her with Daughtry because of her attitude, lol.
And it was so nice to get some backstory on the Kelly situation because I know it was bothering Cook (and it makes a ton of sense which is lovely as well.)
That party certainly was...lively. But I like that things appear to be working themselves out, and I don't know if I can't wait to know what happens with everyone because I'm suffiently wrapped up in the lives of all these characters :)
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I'm glad Kelly's story worked! Good old persevering Cook.
I love writing party scenes, it's true, and something crazy always seems to happen at a party, don't you think?
Thank you so much! I'm really, really glad that you're enjoying the story!!
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Fitting in the period slang (and the older slang via Joel) was one of the most fun parts of writing the story! Besides, my uncles and father actually talked like that.
Love your toddler analogy! They are all a little over-stressed, and the sudden release pushes things further than it might have ordinarily.
Oh, Robinson.
I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Yay!
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I lack the capability of coherence, as it's late and I've had a long day, but I was totally willing to try and then there's that dreadful cliffhanger!!! And now I must go have a lie down.
Seriously, though, really good chapter.
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I'm so so glad you're liking it. Thank you!!!
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Cook cuffing Robinson over the head was hilarious, I hope he managed to talk him into going after Kim.
And as per usual, your Ryan/Simon parts just slay me, they are just so wonderful together, and I laughed out loud when Simon found Ryan´s jumper sexy, hehe.
And meeep, what a cliffhanger.
Is it Thursday yet? ;)
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I'm so pleased folks are enjoying Kim and Robinson. I agree with Cook; I think he needs a cuff!
Thank you so much!
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