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Fanfic: Shards - Part 5

Jul 03, 2008 03:14

Title: "Shards - Part 5"
Author: J.J.
Warning: It's an AU BASED ON THE MANGA, it probably contains some OOCness, uses Japanese words and includes some spoilers.
Notes: I wanted to make a fic. I ended up making this weird things instead…
Disclaimer:
"Tokyo Babylon" and "X" belong to Clamp. I'm merely using their characters because I love them... ( Read more... )

fic: shards

Comments 6

ruthk July 3 2008, 04:05:00 UTC

Well, Seishirou is really being even more of a jackass in that chapter, considering Subaru a "thing", laughing at Kakyo's "crush" and deeming the end of the world a boring party...
I'm glad you continued that story, but it looks like it's coming to an end and it might not be a happy end.
Poor Subaru's decision to at least help Kamui (going back to his wish from the hospital in Tokyo Babylon) by sacrificing his life makes sense.
One thing I don't quite get is the "Subaru can't have sex" scene in the beginning: is it about his being gay, impotent or simply too traumatized by Seishirou? (Sorry for being obtuse)

jjblue1 July 3 2008, 21:15:39 UTC

Well... the bad side of Seishiro is that he effectively doesn't care... and he's sure he doesn't see Subaru as a person... and it's hell to deal with him in this fic... no matter how much times I write a piece I'm never satisfed with what he does ( ... )

anonymous July 3 2008, 16:20:35 UTC

Really GREAT!
Only you are so mean to stop there! :P
I know I'm repeating myself, but can't wait for the next chapter!
Love it so much!
Hugs
Moko

jjblue1 July 3 2008, 21:17:44 UTC

^____________^
Come on, be honest, you don't really want to know the end now, do you?
What about suspance? Sharing with Seishiro the idea he might not make in time? ^_^

Glad you do!

suppii July 5 2008, 06:08:22 UTC

Fabulous!

THREE updates in 1 week! *bow down* You're really in the toll, aren't you? ^_^

This master piece is one of your work which intrigued me very much. Aside from unusual, but awesome, story-telling style, the basic topic where Seishirou failed to invoke Hokuto's spell is terrific. The ending suspense is driving me crazy >___<

And Seishirou is really blind (no pun intended ^_~). He strongly believes Subaru doesn't love...(poor boy)

Oh, and by the way, may I add you as friend? ^_^

jjblue1 July 5 2008, 14:01:33 UTC

*blush* I'm trying to make up for the past lack of updates...

I'm glad you like this story! Seishiro's not really capable to understand Subaru. He thinks that since he's who he is and did/does what he did/does it would be logic for Subaru not to love him. He's not good at thinking things from Subaru's perspective.

Sure you can, I'll be happy if you do!