Lies [part two]

[jinsung]

Part two is up. I like to polish obsessively, hopefully it won't be like this in future.

3088 words

(Ended up chopping a part up to post separately on jorge_callas' advice, but I think it reads quite well this way too.)

Comments

[jinsung]

Thanks for reading.

I don't want to say...schoolwork is keeping me busy.

[naeve14]

This chapter is more like Yunho's reflection on everything that had happened, from a long time ago until the one recently, his encounter with Yoochun. The one that unsettled him, racking chaos in his almost perfect systematic life. Shaking up his belief and blurring the thin line that separate right and wrong from his perspective

[jinsung]

Well, thanks for reading, and this part was written quite some time ago just that I like to keep editing and editing.

I'm glad that you appreciate the story and took the time to tell me what you think of it. I don't like to tell people what to think of what I've written, I'll give a bit of a hint here that pretty important to the story...Yunho's not homophobic.

And Yoochun did do some things wrong.

:)

I was glad to accede to your request.

[naeve14]

Yunho's not homophobic

That's good to know, coz I got a bit misunderstood at the way he behaved when he came to realization that Yoochun is a man. Well, if I'm not mistaken, he called Yoochun as monster, or something, which made me a bit disappointed with Yunho.

Thanks for clarifying that one for me *smiles*

[jinsung]

Well, it's because it was a lie, and also because most men don't masquerade as women. ;)

[senbonsakura]

gosh.. there's no boundaries to love...

[jinsung]

Hmm, I always found that debatable... and the other (big) problem is that Yoochun lied about a ton of things and is possibly disturbed in many ways.

[jinsung]

btw thanks for reading and commenting, i really appreciate it!

[dilovesyunjae]

wow....anymore update soon? this is good.

[jinsung]

I'm working on it. I just finished my exams.