Lies [part two]

Oct 10, 2009 22:40

Part two is up. I like to polish obsessively, hopefully it won't be like this in future.

3088 words

(Ended up chopping a part up to post separately on jorge_callas' advice, but I think it reads quite well this way too.)

Feelings are so painful to have, how they twist and turn inside, clanging and sloshing with all the chaos of the distant sea! Yunho wishes he were totally without them. )

yoochun, lies, yunho, fanfic, multi-part

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jinsung October 11 2009, 12:25:09 UTC
Thanks for reading.

I don't want to say...schoolwork is keeping me busy.

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naeve14 October 11 2009, 06:24:32 UTC
This chapter is more like Yunho's reflection on everything that had happened, from a long time ago until the one recently, his encounter with Yoochun. The one that unsettled him, racking chaos in his almost perfect systematic life. Shaking up his belief and blurring the thin line that separate right and wrong from his perspective ( ... )

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jinsung October 11 2009, 12:21:33 UTC
Well, thanks for reading, and this part was written quite some time ago just that I like to keep editing and editing.

I'm glad that you appreciate the story and took the time to tell me what you think of it. I don't like to tell people what to think of what I've written, I'll give a bit of a hint here that pretty important to the story...Yunho's not homophobic.

And Yoochun did do some things wrong.

:)

I was glad to accede to your request.

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naeve14 October 11 2009, 12:35:03 UTC
Yunho's not homophobic

That's good to know, coz I got a bit misunderstood at the way he behaved when he came to realization that Yoochun is a man. Well, if I'm not mistaken, he called Yoochun as monster, or something, which made me a bit disappointed with Yunho.

Thanks for clarifying that one for me *smiles*

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jinsung October 11 2009, 13:29:22 UTC
Well, it's because it was a lie, and also because most men don't masquerade as women. ;)

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senbonsakura October 19 2009, 15:38:23 UTC
gosh.. there's no boundaries to love...

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jinsung October 20 2009, 09:14:50 UTC
Hmm, I always found that debatable... and the other (big) problem is that Yoochun lied about a ton of things and is possibly disturbed in many ways.

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jinsung October 20 2009, 09:17:09 UTC
btw thanks for reading and commenting, i really appreciate it!

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dilovesyunjae December 3 2009, 12:42:33 UTC
wow....anymore update soon? this is good.

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jinsung December 4 2009, 19:08:54 UTC
I'm working on it. I just finished my exams.

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