Forgive Me: Onew/Key; NC-17, part 1

[jinkibumiminho]

Title: Forgive Me
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: NC-17 (for theme, explicit sexual content)
Pairing/Focus: Onew/Key
Word count: 8200
Genre: Drama, smut
Summary: Jinki comes home drunk and takes what he wants from Kibum. There are repercussions for this violation.
Squick/trigger warnings: Issues of consent and control relating to sex (not a torrid BDSM fic, but I

Comments

[ippeun_nuna]

Awww...poor Onew! When he thought he actually forced Key first, that must've felt so bad. But it was hot T.T
And I love how you described the kissing, and the restriction of hands held in his pockets, that was ... woohoo.

OH! I just saw that there is part two XD
I will read it now :)

I will get back to you in comment for the part two <3

[min7girl]

At first I read the summary and thought..oh hell! There was an ontae fic with that exact description and although it isn't finished it is quite sad and depressing. But then i thought of how Key would handle the situation vs. Taemin, who mentally blocked out everything related to SHINee after it happened, and I figured a Key take on this situation would be much more compelling.

Then i read your version and of course there is no non-con. It's all in Jinki's head. Which figures since Jinki is so jinki at times and screws himself up more than not. I do like how Key resolves it after getting the letter and of course the hot intimate times in this are quite lovely.

[omiichan]

Totally in LOVE with this~~

it just cute, finding Jinki keep felt that he did something wrong, while Kibum's waiting for his confession, and the late realization of how Kibum treat him differently from the other.

the video bonus is so making me giddy, loving his deep voice xDD

<3<3<3

[jinkibumiminho]

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the nice comment.

[imvus]

Alcohol can be a bitch, can't it? but for some it can give them some courage to do what they really wanted to do... and poor Jinki got both effects...:)

Very loving and tender moments with touches of hotness made this wonderful.

[jinkibumiminho]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it (you know there's a part two, right?).

[imvus]

hot damn!! We get onkey smut?!!!?

[lightism]

aklsjfölwijefökj~~~~~~~
Q_Q Oh my gawd. I love you for this, okay?
I mean... DAMN that was so hot and sweet and teasing and all RAWR!!!
This is the type of fic I need to read more than once, because I enjoy it so much! ; w ; <333
I love how Kibum tells Jinki what to do. :Q____
You totally hit my weak spot with this!
THANKS FOR WRITING SUCH AWESOME FICS!!! *creeper snuggle*

[jinkibumiminho]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! {snuggle}
You know there's a part two...yes? [oh, and hello, Taemin tummy]

[lightism]

>w> Yeah, saw it, read it, drooled like an idiot, went to bed happy like an unicorn. <3
I will comment later, when I'm back from work. :3