Wow, that's awesome - and chilling! I wasn't expecting that when you started writing. Love your character descriptions; so much detail without being forced.
I like the way you've managed to convey that you shouldn't always judge someone by looks alone ;)
Great ending as well that finishes the story off nicely with no loose ends, yet still makes me want to read more!
Haha, excellent, I was hoping someone would comment on that. :D I started the story off a little slow and bland on purpose, hoping to kind of use it as a contrast to the second half; 'this is her life, this is his'.
What did you think of the earthquake motif? I go back and forth about whether it really worked like I meant it to.
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I like the way you've managed to convey that you shouldn't always judge someone by looks alone ;)
Great ending as well that finishes the story off nicely with no loose ends, yet still makes me want to read more!
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What did you think of the earthquake motif? I go back and forth about whether it really worked like I meant it to.
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