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Ficlet - The O.C. - Guilty Conscience - Chapter 4 (Trey/Seth)

May 10, 2010 13:47

Title: Guilty Conscience
Author: Jewel21
Rating: Hard R for sexual situations
Show: The O.C.
Genre: Angst/Slash
Pairing: Seth/Trey
Type: WIP
Summary: An unforeseeable event sends Trey and Seth back to Orange County.

A/N: This story contains slash. If you are offended by such pairings, please don't read. This story also follows after my series ‘ ( Read more... )

fanfic: o.c.

Comments 4

chase65 May 11 2010, 22:13:34 UTC

Awww, the ending visual is kind of sweet even though Trey has a lot of pain. Good for Seth fir not allowing him to just walk out.

jewel21 May 11 2010, 22:22:32 UTC

I'm glad you liked the ending :) Trey is in a lot of pain, but things will get better. There's one chapter left and that should be up by next week. I hope you'll enjoy it!

dogsbody01 June 10 2010, 00:36:10 UTC

Great chapter.Trey's attempts, to stuff in, how overloaded he was emotionally;by Dawn's death and his subsequent meltdown.Was just the stuff, of great writing.So was, having Seth be the shoulder, Trey cried upon,in the end.

jewel21 June 10 2010, 20:26:47 UTC

Aww, thanks so much for the lovely review! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter :D