Title: Get out (that's the way Word saved it) Author: jerom2003 Word Count: 5463 Rating: 18 (drugs, angst) Summary: 1974, John's lost weekend and so they met. Many thanks to the editor of this part minds_opaque!
I really liked this. It's an interesting story line to go with and sometimes I'm unfortunatley a sucker for Paul in Pain stories. Expecially after the day that I had today. I think that the dilouge in here was probably your strongest point and quite honestly, your english is much better than I expected. I really encourage you to editing the second part. If you need help with any of it, just let me know.
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