And when I do bad, we will still burn bright.

[jeri_1116]

Title: And when I do bad, we will still burn bright
Author: jeri_1116
Rating: PG
W/C: 2,772
Disclaimer: Dude! I don't own Twilight. All that shit is Ms. Meyer's doing. But if I did own it... Jake would have imprinted on Edward at the end of New Moon and I would have shipped Bella back to Arizona where she belongs.
Author's notes:  Jakeward, but more Edward and

Comments

[sarahsezlove]

Kisses?? I'm stripping off, here!!

Arsena...as always, you have this way of taking everything down to the bare bones. You don't pad out your writing with unnecessary extras - you don't need to. Your characters say SO much in so few words...and it's always more than enough.

Dammit, girl! You move me every single time.

[valenti1965]

As you know I don't really know this fandom but I agree with Sarah, you say so much with your fabulous words Arsena. I love your writing so much. xxx

[seajellybaby]

I have only a vague idea of this fandom as you know but I love your writing so that doesnt matter. You totally sucked me in and kept me interested... It's a lovely father/son relationship which you somehow make into more! And the feeling and passion of the characters is so real! Great job!

[wheelie47]

Well damn, Arsena! I don't know this fandom very well but I didn't need to to appreciate the excellent writing in this piece!

Just loved the emotion and the connection between father and son. They didn't need lots of talk, they said it all with thought and feelings.

Excellent!

[random_nic]

As you know I don't like Twilight, and I really don't like Bella. But man Edward, that's low!

The one thing I do like about Twilight is my boy Carlisle. And you're totally reminding me of Holden/Noah with the surrogate father-son relationship here. Which has me thinking up Nuke Twilight fic, with Holden as Carlisle, Noah as Edward, and Luke as Bella. I'd like Luke to be Jake, but come on.

I'm just saying, my birthday's in July.