kardia (2/2)

[rubyls]

kardia (2/2)
sunggyu/woohyun/dongwoo, pg, general, warning (highlight): character death
they make a heart. sci-fi AU. 11,132w

longest thing i've ever written. huge thanks to luvey for all the handholding ♥

Comments

[anonymous]

here, have a list of my thoughts

[rubyls]

ohh....... oh my god anon. i just have to firstly say thank you, thank you so much for this comment, i - never - i've never had someone write such a detailed, constructive comment for me ever and my god i'm just so /flattered/ that you actually took the time to do this for me. thank youi literally don't know what to say to all your compliments, other than thank you so much and aslkjfd i am incredibly awkward but ahhh i'm really really, really glad you liked the concept. i just started this because i really wanted to write a sci-fi au sort of thing, and it kind of snowballed to something of this length ;;;; i'm also really happy you liked the character dynamics! though i thought this was mostly driven by plot, but i think how this ended also depended a lot on their characters and i tried to stay true to what i think 2woogyu are like

[crazyemosrock]

can i just.
just, wow.
i, i'm speechless.
how did you come up with this? what made you write this?? how long did this take? how did you feel about this when it was finished and ready to be posted??
omg i just want to know everything.
this is amazing.

[rubyls]

ahhh alsdlskdf i will try to answer everything! just - firstly thank you for reading, i hope that means you enjoyed it :3

[crazyemosrock]

omg nonsense!! this is spectacular!! seriously. do you know how hard it is to find long fic with plot and no sexual content??
i also really enjoy reading anything out of the normal range of fanfic. sci fi, fantasy adventure, anything terrifying or gory. things that no one tends to write as often.
half a year though, omg. i really can't imagine working on something for so long and then finally finishing it and posting it! i can't imagine what that feels like.
ah, thanks for answering my questions though. now i aspire to write something of this caliber one day

[rubyls]

hehe i haven't been reading a lot of fic lately, so i am quite out of the loop! but that's sad, i wish longfic was more common ;;;;

and ahh i like reading sci-fi and fantasy adventure fic, too! mostly because i'm a nerd, but yeah nobody writes these things :( i love a great AU, and i wish more people wrote AUs tbh. :)

thank you for reading, and ahh that is too much flattery for something i wrote, so i'll just say i hope you get to write something of this length one day! i'd love to read it ♥

[halcyondusk]

jesus jay

this is heartbreaking (uhhh no pun intended uhm) and wow by the second half of the story the whole conflict between woohyun and sunggyu and dongwoo as the sort of go-between who's too kind and maybe too easy to guilt trip into not saying anything was really keeping me hooked ;; and the operation scene, the patient death scene, ouch D:

auuuugh dongwoo not feeling anything when he sees his name at the end. augh. the world of science is so cruel and harsh and full of ethical and moral questions eep ;; ilu and your writing /rolls

[rubyls]

jesus jo WHY DO YOU READ THINGS I WRITE EVEN

dongwoo as the sort of go-between who's too kind and maybe too easy to guilt trip into not saying YES YES THANK YOU \o/

i'm sorry for killing the patient D: but that was really what made me write this entire thing in the first place so it had to happen :(

yes it is :( science is quite scary when it wants to be IDEK I'M A NERD THAT STICKS MY REAL LIFE INTO FIC OKAY eeep ;;;; ilu jo /rolls with you ♥

[cosmicfish]

;~~~; this is so depressing ;;;;;

but so so so well written! i really enjoyed reading it ;; you can almost never find really well written long fics! thank you so much writing and sharing this ♥

[rubyls]

huhu omg thank you so much for this comment! i'm sorry it made you sad ;;;;; but i couldn't end it any happier (i tried) because i didn't want it to seem unrealistic ;~~~~; thank you so much for enjoying it, too! i'm really really glad you did, and ahh i never find long fic anywhere in infinite fandom tbh. also i'm really glad that you thought it was well-written, even though i think that's way too kind a compliment ;w; thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment ♥

[jetpacking]

this was so neatly written that i could feel how big of a project it was for you and i appreciate that. it was a refreshing change from the usual genres of fanfic and i'm glad you decided to finish it :')

i really love how you translated the three of them into this fic *___* you understand their personalities so well! it was so fun to watch how they acted and interacted. the woowoo near the end made up for all of the sad omg. ok maybe not all but some. i loved your woohyun. i love how he was so bold but also really sensitive. i feel like that's how he really is irl so i was really happy reading your portrayal of him 8'))) same with your dongwoo. and sunggyu. i would go into it more but i feel like this comment would get way too long so. ahaha

the last line is harsh. i like it

anyways, late comment is late but i felt like this deserved a comment, even if it wasn't a very good one ;;;

♥

[rubyls]

ahh firstly thank you so much! your comment made me smile really really widely, so idk what you're talking about when you say it wasn't a good comment :'3

this was a pretty big project ;; it just took me ages and i don't usually stick with a fic so long (my attention span is that of a fly's) and so to just finish this in the first place made me really happy :3 and i'm glad you felt that it was a refreshing genre! i am a bit of a science geek ;; also that you found the characterisation good bc that's really most of what i worry about most when i write fic ;~~~; 2woo is my otp lmao so i didn't plan for this to have very much 2woo when i started it, but guess it worms its way into everything 8) and i'm so glad you liked woohyun in this too (and dongwoo, and sunggyu!) :'3 and he was so bold but also really sensitive. you just described what woohyun is to me in like a sentence omfg \o/

thank you so much for your comment, i'm really grateful that you took the time to leave me one ♥