remix for lastingdream8

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Title: Facts of Life [The 'Why, yes, I AM perfect' Remix]
Rating: PG-13
Group/Pairing: Tegoshi/Masuda
Warnings: Gratuitous Tegofail
Notes: I want to apologize to lastingdreams8 for somehow managing to write TegoMass from her archive (I am so sorry). Also thanks to my wonderful beta-reader for being amazing as always.
Link to Original Story: " Snapshots" (Drabble

Comments

[lastingdreams8]

Ok, I'm writing this comment as I go along, and I can tell that I'll already love this fic :D

...or that rain fell down and not up, or that Massu wouldn’t talk to you for a week if you got dirt on his bag.
I LOVE how you described these as facts. The rain one is so simple, yet such a pretty image:) And I love that Massu's the type to do that, cute! :D

And you segued perfectly into love being something you can’t practice, not without breaking a lot of hearts in the process.
AWW. What an awesome line :)

especially when Massu was one hundred and ten percent oblivious and kept doing things that drove Tegoshi insane.CUTE! 110% oblivious- an awesome phrase! :D

[lastingdreams8]

Ah, thank you! I'm so glad you weren't angry that I wrote TegoMass, but I was reading through your fics, and the idea hit me and I took it and ran a mile. A few miles.

And I love that Massu's the type to do that, cute!
We know what he's like with his personal possessions♥

Oh man, and I almost thought that it had worked too!
But wouldn't that be much too easy, hehehe.

Tegoshi would think this way, turn it into a compliment versus something bad about his plan not working
Of course♥ Because he is confident, and probably not very inward looking.

I loved this particular plan because the missing ‘ki’ hiragana reminded me of a scene from Proposal Daisakusen
Yes! After I wrote it, I remembered a similar scene, and I thought it was from ProDai! But I couldn't quite remember. Of course it's much more insulting for poor Massu since he isn't a girl at all...

I can’t believe you pulled that out of just a meager few sentencesIt may have been a few sentences, but the idea had so many possibilities behind it, and really, I guess that's what

[zheinpathos]

I don't think I've ever seen Tegoshi fail as bad as this. He's adorable, really, for thinking that manga would help. XD

Lovely work! <33333

[bananyphophany]

XD I saw it happen once in a fic that I really wish I could find again, where he kept trying to find the right situation to sleep with Massu, and ended up getting foiled every time. It was so awesome... )':

Thank you! *Snuggles you*