remix for lastingdream8

[jentremix_mod]

Title: Facts of Life [The 'Why, yes, I AM perfect' Remix]
Rating: PG-13
Group/Pairing: Tegoshi/Masuda
Warnings: Gratuitous Tegofail
Notes: I want to apologize to lastingdreams8 for somehow managing to write TegoMass from her archive (I am so sorry). Also thanks to my wonderful beta-reader for being amazing as always.
Link to Original Story: " Snapshots" (Drabble

Comments

[lastingdreams8]

Ok, I'm writing this comment as I go along, and I can tell that I'll already love this fic :D

...or that rain fell down and not up, or that Massu wouldn’t talk to you for a week if you got dirt on his bag.
I LOVE how you described these as facts. The rain one is so simple, yet such a pretty image:) And I love that Massu's the type to do that, cute! :D

And you segued perfectly into love being something you can’t practice, not without breaking a lot of hearts in the process.
AWW. What an awesome line :)

especially when Massu was one hundred and ten percent oblivious and kept doing things that drove Tegoshi insane.
CUTE! 110% oblivious- an awesome phrase! :D

Lol, I honestly freaking love how Tegoshi is seriously bringing the ‘love’ study materials into his bookbag and studying on trains, like what you’d really do for class :)

Lol, the way you’ve written Massu is perfect :P Tegoshi is trying to execute his plan for touch and all he gets for responses are straight-forward answers like “you’re standing on my foot.” It’s almost got an awkward feel to it that’s so Massu ^^

he let out a decidedly unmanly scream right in Tegoshi’s ear and dropped him on the floor.
LMAO! Yes, Tegoshi, forgot Massu’s fear for bugs, awesome moment right here! :DDD
Oh man, and I almost thought that it had worked too! Lol

After all, [Tegoshi] was pretty cute at any given time. Maybe Massu had become immune to it.
LOL, hilarious! Tegoshi would think this way, turn it into a compliment versus something bad about his plan not working :P

Aww, orange lilies. Poor Tegoshi ^^ But, of course, Massu would totally have that knowledge handy :)
And more ‘awwww’ as Tegoshi’s bentou plan failed too :/
Even though it’s quite sad that Tegoshi seems to be failing through and through, I loved this particular plan because the missing ‘ki’ hiragana reminded me of a scene from Proposal Daisakusen, and having it stick to the lid was just a genius thought :)

Why hadn’t he thought of that? Cross-dressing was his specialty.
LOL, indeed! :D

Koyama was sitting there, fidgeting in his slutty nurse outfit
HELL YEA XD

The confession scene felt real and so them, and I could totally picture it :D
Man, I can’t believe you pulled that out of just a meager few sentences, but it was fantastic!
♥

[lastingdreams8]

Ah, thank you! I'm so glad you weren't angry that I wrote TegoMass, but I was reading through your fics, and the idea hit me and I took it and ran a mile. A few miles.

And I love that Massu's the type to do that, cute!
We know what he's like with his personal possessions♥

Oh man, and I almost thought that it had worked too!
But wouldn't that be much too easy, hehehe.

Tegoshi would think this way, turn it into a compliment versus something bad about his plan not working
Of course♥ Because he is confident, and probably not very inward looking.

I loved this particular plan because the missing ‘ki’ hiragana reminded me of a scene from Proposal Daisakusen
Yes! After I wrote it, I remembered a similar scene, and I thought it was from ProDai! But I couldn't quite remember. Of course it's much more insulting for poor Massu since he isn't a girl at all...

I can’t believe you pulled that out of just a meager few sentences
It may have been a few sentences, but the idea had so many possibilities behind it, and really, I guess that's what remix is about.
Thanks so much for the lovely comment, I was very worried as to how you'd respond. Obviously you're much more fond of pairings with Koyama and Ryo in them, but... I guess you shouldn't forsake an idea you like when you find one? Idk, that was my excuse♥

Basically, thank you and I'm sorry again for the TegoMass. :);