Another drabble...

Mar 08, 2007 15:44

Stupid cold back again. Have been home with fever, runny nose and a cough so bad I threw up from coughing yesterday ( Read more... )

housemd, slash

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jennyaxe March 8 2007, 16:55:50 UTC
Glad you liked it!

For some reason the only ones I've managed to actually get finished have been sad ones lately.

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ruth_lawrence March 8 2007, 15:06:35 UTC
:-(

Do get well soon!

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jennyaxe March 8 2007, 18:52:34 UTC
Thanks! I'm getting there - am already much better than I was yesterday.

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ruth_lawrence March 8 2007, 21:29:49 UTC
Yay!

that's good to hear :)

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triedunture March 8 2007, 15:31:08 UTC
Slam dunk right there.

*chicken soup*

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jennyaxe March 8 2007, 16:54:03 UTC
Thanks - that means a lot coming from someone who writes as well as you do!

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aribbonofblack March 8 2007, 15:37:47 UTC
Poor, poor House. Poor, poor Wilson.

Packs a lot of punch for 100 words.

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jennyaxe March 8 2007, 16:46:21 UTC
Thanks! I was going to write that compliments are chicken soup for the soul, but that seems a bit over used... but getting positive feedback gives me a happy!

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stained_dreams March 8 2007, 16:11:28 UTC
I loved how you said so much with so little. I also likethe use of repetition, that was effective.

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jennyaxe March 8 2007, 16:44:50 UTC
Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked the repetition.

I got this idea while trying to sleep one night. For some reason I started wondering why House would have more than one cane - I only have the one, it fits me and I don't see any reason to have more than one. Then I thought, maybe it's that he's trying to find one that he feels completely comfortable with rather than almost-but-not-quite.

For the record, I have a collapsible cane, just as House did in "Needle in a Haystack". Not that I yelled and pointed when I saw it on screen, though. Oh no. That would never do. *cough*

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stained_dreams March 9 2007, 07:53:28 UTC
For some people it could be a fashion thing, having more than one, but that clearly isn't House.

But I love your take on the situation, I mean I dd from the writing, but more so now I know the thoughts behind it.

And I love the icon <3

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gnapp March 8 2007, 18:45:38 UTC
I agree - very effectful. I liked it. (Even though everything I know about the characters comes from your LJ. :-)

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