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jenineji

Of Salvation and Perdition

Aug 25, 2012 21:12

This was written for the Ink Smudge Forum - The 100 Words Challenge.
This story and characters belong to me.
Please, do not use.

Hard-worker Vinia unknowingly accepts a no-man to her bed out of loneliness, and despair, but before she could even phantom what all this entailed she ends up with his child.

Of Salvation and Perdition

Chapter 1

( Chapter 1 )

!of salvation and perdition

Comments 1

100 Words - Your Review for Prompt One: Belaud and Selflessness aubrey_simone August 26 2012, 20:35:50 UTC

Well, for you to have been under time constraints, I think this came out really well. I found it very interesting, especially about the no-man - what, exactly, is he, and why does he decide to stay with Vinia? Of course, it's good that these questions came to mind while I read - it just means that I'll continue to read just to find out the answers ( ... )