A New Beginning part 3

[jendill]

So here's the last part... Enjoy!

A New Beginning (Part 3)

It was almost five o’clock before Sara reached the apartment that night. She opened the front door to find Veronica setting up food in the kitchen. There were trays of taco’s and burrito’s and other Mexican foods she didn’t recognize on the table. “Hey Veronica, it looks great! I just

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[wrldpossibility]

I'm glad my babbling post made you remember about this. I'll have time to read it tomorrow morning, but meanwhile, I think it needs to go under a cut. On my friends page, it shows up only black, and that usually means it's too large. I just learned this stuff a few months ago. In your journal, you want to highlight your text (say everything except your intro and title), then click on the LJ Cut box. It's one of the buttons above the text box. Then it will come up with a new box that lets you type in the title (or just "read more"). Click it, and you're done. If that doesn't make sense, go to the LJ help page, and type in LJ cut.

But I can come back to your page and read the story here, too, so no biggie. Just to let you know though. I have to watch The Office premiere tonight, and will read tomorrow!

Amy

[jendill]

Thanks, I'll fix that tomorrow morning

[wrldpossibility]

No worries! I just remember how someone had to talk me through it. If it's not showing up on my friends page, it's probably not on anyone's...just a blank spot, and I want you to get feedback! :)

[jendill]

I've tried it twice... and it keeps telling me my post is too long... I've even cut it in half trying to shorten it and it still doesn't work. Maybe i'll try from home tomorrow... our work computers are super slow!

[wrldpossibility]

Just finished. Thanks for the read! There are so many possibilities with this plotline, and I'm always a sucker for the words "Sara Scofield". *g*

[jendill]

Isn't it cute? I don't know if I plan on doing anything more with it. Hey I wanted to ask your opinion. Do you think it's good enough to post over at prisonrbeakfic.net? I've never been ballsey enough to do that....

[wrldpossibility]

I think given the time you must have spent on it (trust me, I know how much time it takes), you owe it to yourself to post it there and find out. There is a huge range of writing ability on prisonbreakfic. Reviewers there are supportive and rarely mean, I've found! And you'll get a lot more people reading it than here (I'd post at both). Put up the first chapter and see! I think a lot of people will love the plotline. I have read one other fic that is similar to yours (Michael serves his 5 year sentence, and Sara waits for him), but I can't remember the author. Give it a try.

[jendill]

*takes deep breath* Ok I took your advice & did it.. I posted... they've gotta validate it or whatnot... so cross your fingers!