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Having Day Dreams, About Night Things ... Part Two

May 14, 2011 18:30

Title: Having Day Dreams, About Night Things,
In the Middle of the Afternoon - Part Two
Author: Jellie_RayneLuv
Rating: NC17 eventually (adult content people, don't like it, don't read it) This part is still rather tame.
Pairing: John & Ellie (like you had to ask?!)
Spoilers: None, really ... although this isn't exactly following canon. The ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

night_lotus May 14 2011, 03:08:28 UTC

I like John's "take charge" attitude and how he finds himself the prey rather than the predator; nice role reversal.

Curious to see what kind of contract he and Ellie agree upon. :-)

~NL

jellie_rayneluv May 14 2011, 03:24:11 UTC

Hopefully it won't be very long before I can get it written. Wanted to have it Beta'd before I progress, but now it has become like a steam roller that won't stop.

I liked that little role reversal twist too, and I had fun with John's inner dialog ... the contract will be interesting as well, I hope.

There may be a twist or two left before this part of the tale comes to a close.

sunshineali May 14 2011, 03:58:17 UTC

Yep, he's gonna go for it. He's going to make her his. Very cool.

jellie_rayneluv May 14 2011, 04:41:43 UTC

Yes, it is cool, very cool.

Hope to have more posted in a few days. So stick around, it's gonna get interesting.

goddessofbirth May 14 2011, 14:37:00 UTC

Hmmm....yummy! Seriously, lady, I think this story is the best piece of yours I've read so far. Can't wait to see where you take it!!

jellie_rayneluv May 15 2011, 22:17:56 UTC

Wow! Thanks so much for that compliment. I thought it was pretty good myself, just wasn't sure if anyone else would think so. I know it may be too much thinking and not enough action, but I always like the process of getting to the good stuff.

But John always does like to have some sort of plan in place, diligent lad that he is.

Hope to have more posted soon ... probably more talk and a whole lot of action. LOL.

cedelede May 14 2011, 17:26:25 UTC

John's a smart man! I love that he has the mind to make sure they're on the same page before they go down that road. Eager to see just what happens when he lays down the rules, so to speak.

jellie_rayneluv May 15 2011, 22:20:10 UTC

I'm glad you are enjoying this so far. Hope to have more soon, where we shall see just what John and Ellie have in mind for each other.

It's sure to be a festive time. ;) So stay tuned.

brandywine00 May 16 2011, 04:26:58 UTC

"This part somewhat tame?!"
Then the rest of this tale is gonna melt my computer! How sexy was that, with the fancy footwork?

Wow, lady, you've outdone yourself!

..."He wouldn't be her dirty little secret." Nice twist on the classic 'hidden relationship' fear. I love how he wants the openness, not hiding anything from the rest of their circle. Yeah, Devon's gotta take a hike ... literally! ;D

So very, very glad you're writing again, and thrilled with this story! Keep rockin' with this, gal!

jellie_rayneluv May 16 2011, 15:47:23 UTC

Well, I was feeling a little evil when I wrote this.
and compared to what I have in mind, this was tame. You should know if you read the general outline that was in the e-mails. (Which I would love your thoughts on btw)
You know how I love twists and surprises ... So expect a big one before it's done.
Gotta run now, lots to do.

Thanks Again Evil Triplet!