Carth <3's Angst

[jelenedra]

Chapter 4 of Purpose Beyond Revenge. On a roll lately. Just proof reading that comes from somewhere else OTHER than Microsoft word. Comments and reviews appreciated. Will be updated as I edit it, so check back often.

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[kabochan]

I went through and edited this chapter, but I pasted it into Word so I could make more specific comments. Do you want me to email it to you?

Another Draft up

[jelenedra]

Whee, new version. I hope it's better! (I'm sure it is, I followed most of your comments) =)