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Nov 04, 2011 02:50

Title: The frozen heart has gone
Type: one-shot
Genre: angst, romance
Paring: Yamachii
Rate: NC 17
Sum:
Life is cruel to someone.
Especially Chinen Yuri, a 18 year old boy, who lost his parents in a car accident, his house was appropriated by his uncle too. He became homeless and had to work to earn his own living. One winter night, he was cold and starve ( Read more... )

yamachii, fanfic

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Comments 19

switenana November 3 2011, 19:57:02 UTC
spot first, ok? >.<"
need to sleep
gonna read it later

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switenana November 4 2011, 03:30:53 UTC
poor Chinen
he did it because of that rough situation ne
yokatta Yama-chan can find him in the end
*whacked Yama-chan*
it's because you said something baka
make Chinen misunderstand about your feeling

love it >.<
well done

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jeakachan92 November 4 2011, 15:05:14 UTC
you come first ne,
Thank for reading.

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hikarichan92 November 4 2011, 01:48:37 UTC
aawww ~~~ this story is so sweet !!! :3
poor Chinen...
but thank‘s to yamada who have been cheered up Chinen...
nice one!

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harumi01 November 4 2011, 03:48:51 UTC
spot~
gonna read later

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harumi01 November 4 2011, 07:17:00 UTC
poor chii...
yamada thanks you save
our chibi...
and you must take care of him
not hurt him..
if you hurt him
i slapped your chubby cheek
*whacked by yamada

kya!! >w<
like it....
love it....

boku wa rumi chan desu...
nice to meet you...^^

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jeakachan92 November 4 2011, 14:51:54 UTC
hai watashi wa Aka-chan desu.
nice to meet u too rumi-chan.*bow*

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harumi01 November 4 2011, 15:28:18 UTC
hihihi ^^
can we be friend???

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ukino_kun November 4 2011, 05:58:48 UTC
Thak you for the fic >///<
I enjoyed reading it <3

"Someone can help me write this, I will provide the plot, of course, and I need someone can write "smut" scene too because it includes in the fic."
Please don't give your fics to anyone.
I love your style and WHAT IS MORE I love your English!
You can take a break but don't give it to anyone.

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jeakachan92 November 4 2011, 14:55:10 UTC
your words make me feel touched.
I think my English is not good enough.
Moreover I need someone who can help me edit my fic of course I will still write most of them.
Thank for your care ne, love u.
By the way, may I have your name?

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ukino_kun November 4 2011, 15:03:00 UTC
Ahaha :D There is no need to thank me :D
Your English may be not perfect but it is still much better than some other fic-writer's Engish of Yamachii pair :D
Sure, I can tell you my name.
My name is Tanya. But if you want you can call me my username.

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ai_no_messeji November 4 2011, 07:11:53 UTC
Aka-chan *hugs*
This is a good one, ne~
It's really a sweet story.
No one would have expected this. Who could have thought that in the brink of desperation, an angel like Yama-chan will come and save a lost lamb like Chii. It's so heart-felt, ne. I really enjoyed this one. It touched me deeply. I really am happy that I met someone inspiring like Aka-chan. *hugs*
Aka-chan's stories are always beautiful.
Your stories always touch me deeply.
It's sad but it is full of meaning.
You really inspire me to write.
I really, really love you Aka-chan~

Oh, life must be troublesome on the real-world ne?
I guess we must do our priorities first.
But ne, Aka-chan, you can take a break.
We, especially I, will wait for your come back ne~
We understand how tiring and stressful it is.
You told me as well that you are busy with studies so...
... please, if you really need to then we will wait ne.

- Ai-chan

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jeakachan92 November 4 2011, 15:03:23 UTC
*hug and kiss* you too Ai-chan
You really make me happy today when I read your comment.
Yesterday I still felt so sad because my best friend is going to study in Japan soon. But my mood is better now, and I will try my best ne.
You're right life is not perfect but we still can find happiness deshou ka?
I am really happy when someone says I can inspire them. Love to read you fics, too. Sorry if I can't comment ne but I still read. >///< *bow*

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