Chocolate Fic for kohee

[cupid_johnny]

An unfortunate mistake happened in je_whiteday this year, in that the same assignment was sent out to two people. We didn't realize this happened until it was too late to change assignments and thought it would be unfair to either writer to not post their work. As such, kohee is receiving two fics this year.

To: kohee
From: tottchupi

Title: The Theory of Evolution
Pairing:

Comments

[missiemae]

this is pure love ♥ ♥ ♥
it feels like this could be real. =)

[kohee]

SQUEEEEEE!!!

I'm really late in commenting (RL sucks sometimes) but that does not discount my absolute SQUEE GLEE :D :D

I love this - it's written in a very realistic way, and as always I adore the interaction of Pi and fellow Johnny boys. And also I love how you throw in that little bit about Pi post break-up and wondering outloud how he wished bitch Yuu was like Maki but he didn't realise he was totally crushing on her! YAAAAY.

And I love how Maki confessed towards the end - it's really something I can see out of a manga/drama. Tee hee!!

This fic left me with a little warm feeling. I'm all giggly now and will have sweet dreams when I sleep (hopefully)!!

THANK YOU ♥♥♥

[pocariporii]

Hehe...Ryo knows something that Yamapi doesn't! And Maki's in denial but Meisa's there to burst her bubbles!

Really cute ficlet, tottchupi! It's nice how you include all the facts and rumors of their relationship to the 'present' <3

[hanmie7227]

Love the stages
hehehhehehe
TOTALLY PURE
thanks for sharing my dear
It is very nice to read it

[shichi_0309]

Yamaki ♥♥♥

I'm glad that there are still Yamaki fans even though they don't do anything together..

nice fic, thanks for sharing :)