je_united 2019 - Gift fic for sanadas_sanity

[h_itoshi]

Je_united gift fic for sanadas_sanity

Title: Are you gonna dance with me?
Pairing: Yaotome Hikaru x Yabu Kota, past Yaotome Hikaru x Nakajima Yuto
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: Mild/non-descriptive sexual content, cheating, smoking, drinking, lack of communication, Daiki being straight, Yuto being an asshole.
Summary: Daiki has a crappy taste in gay clubs, Hikaru

Comments

[sanadas_sanity]

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hi. i am sleepy and need to go to bed but i wanted to let you know how happy this fic made me and i will leave a proper comment for it once i get up, reread it, and give you the love your deserve

[sanadas_sanity]

Hello! I am back

[lady_aenea]

Thank you SO MUCH for this super pretty comment :3

[thesecretdoor]

I knew that this had to be you!! I was going to comment when it went up but I didn’t want to make it too easy for anyone wanting to guess the authors! I knew it was you as soon as I read this though because dingy clubs and smoking and your beautiful way with words.

With a whisper against his lips, the other man stopped being a stranger. - This line in particular is just beautiful *__*

Hikaru wondered, briefly, how experienced a guy had to be to read a complete stranger with so much precision. - This too. I love this thought!

I love the whole set up! I love Daiki dragging him to a bar and Hikaru being so stuborn but of course Yabu is irrestable. I love how Yabu is totally cool with it all being casual and even though Hikaru is wary, he can’t say no >_<

And Yabu works at the club *__* As a pole dancer *__* I am all about those long legs wrapping round a pole! Wearing EYELINER!!!

And then the angst T_T Oh beautiful pain. It hurts more because this - Maybe deep down he knew what he was going to find. What he was looking for. Poor

[lady_aenea]

ERUUUUU
I always want to marry your comments *-* and your fics.... and all your words, actually :3
Even if I'm never anonymous for you :'D (or anyone, tbh)

Hikaru wondered, briefly, how experienced a guy had to be to read a complete stranger with so much precision. - This too. I love this thought!

Like I said to Kat, I wanted Yabu to be a free spirit :3 A meaningless hookup every other week. So thank you so much for noting that line :333333
I'm beginning to think that guys on eyeliner are another of my tells :'D but I just can't resist. Especially Yabu, He has BEAUTIFUL eyes, super intense eyes :'D

Ass-hole Yuto is seriously one of my favourite flavours of Yuto.
And this is why we're married :D <3333333

I wanted to make Yabu sound as if he was srt of used to things to end quickly, and sometimes on bad terms :P so yeah, sassy but resigned? :3 I'm happy the telepathy line worked for you :DDDDD
THANK YOU FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL COMMENT I LOVE YOU