je_united 2019 - Gift fic for sanadas_sanity

[h_itoshi]

Je_united gift fic for sanadas_sanity

Title: Are you gonna dance with me?
Pairing: Yaotome Hikaru x Yabu Kota, past Yaotome Hikaru x Nakajima Yuto
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: Mild/non-descriptive sexual content, cheating, smoking, drinking, lack of communication, Daiki being straight, Yuto being an asshole.
Summary: Daiki has a crappy taste in gay clubs, Hikaru

Comments

[sanadas_sanity]

Hello! I am back!

First, just want to say that I really, really appreciate you writing YabuHika. I think when I saw that my heart was immediately happy AND THEN YOU EVEN DID ASSHOLE YUTO HIIIIIIII but i'll get to that later.

I really like the set up for this fic. How you see how Hikaru isn't happy with his life and you get the hint that something happened in his past that's affected him, but we don't know what yet (except me at this point :x hi. i've read this like three times at this point). And Daiki being so damn positive. We need a bright sunshine, voice of reason.

And the moment that Hikaru sees Yabu is nice. Like an immediate attraction to him, and Yabu is the only thing that he can see and they end up dancing togetherrrrrrr. And how much just dancing with Yabu messes with his head. I like that Hikaru has to give himself a reason to kiss him as well, like letting down a little barrier before he can. Like he keeps trying to find bail but there's something about Yabu that keeps him going.

Also. Hi. I am really weak to bottom Hikaru. That just made me so damn happy that little detail was included. Thank you for that.

I thought it was really sweet that Daiki checked in on Hikaru xD if my friend suddenly disappeared I'd be worried about them too.

But then Yabu keeps asking to have Hikaru's number ;~~~~~~~~~; even when Hikaru tries to deflect and not give it to him because of his past issues. MY HEARTTTTTTTTTT. I wanna shake Hikaru though. It's not a bad decision!!! KEEP KISSING THE PRETTY BOY AND BE HAPPY

Hikaru and club dancing Yabu is so....nice.....I swear I can adjective. But him being interested in Yabu's work and then going to see him dance and being completely enraptured by him. I really like that you described Yabu as "sound in motion" and I really like this part in particular:
But what held Hikaru captive were Yabu’s eyes. Eyelined burning coals staring right into Hikaru’s soul.
I don't know why, but it's just a really beautiful description. I think I've reread those two lines a few too many times.

THEN YOU GO AND BREAK MY LITTLE HEART INTO A THOUSAND PIECES. HOW DARE!!! It makes sense :c Hikaru didn't properly communicate with him. And their whole conversation once Yabu finds his place and they talk things through ;~~~~;

Of courseeeeeeee Hikaru has problems over Yuto. and just.....that was the perfect asshole move. AND HIKARU'S TYPE IN THIS FIC. Tall, dark and handsome. And Hikaru so obviously loves him but it's casual for Yuto and just ;~~~; how could he do that to him??? (he's an asshole...i know BUT STILL!!!!!!!)

"When I had no idea you wanted to be exclusive.” Yabu sat up to crouch in front of Hikaru. “I’m a good pole dancer, but my telepathic skills are rusty. You should have said something before, save us the pain.”
Okay but the sass in this line made me giggle

I don't think you understand how happy my heart was that Yabu and Hikaru ended up happy and just
“Stay,” Hikaru said, and took Yabu’s hand. “Please,” he added.
MY HEARRRRRRRTTTTTTTTTTTTT

But....yes. this was wonderful. Thank you so much for writing this!!! I hope my screaming made sense xD

[lady_aenea]

Thank you SO MUCH for this super pretty comment :3 *-*
I love it and I love you so much.
I wanted to give you YabuHika since day one :'D because I know how much you love them.
I'm sorry I made Hikka so broken :'D but his baseline neurosis plus Yuto breaking his heart made him weary.
Also yeah, I'm from the Hikaru bottoming club too so... :3 no prob there, sis. heh.

I am obsessed with Yabu's eyes :3 I guess it showed on this fic.

I'm so sorry I broke your heart T_T but Yabu in this fic was a free spirit. I wanted to make him a little broken too. Because of his work and because the club was a huge part of his life, usually every hook up was meaningless and casual, so he'd also had his heart broken a couple of times. So he's kinda used to "casual" meaning just that, and to not expect something he's not being offered. :'P

I WAS SO GLAD you asked for Asshole!Yuto, because I LOVE WRITING HIM LIKE THAT :3 Yuto having a gf and cheating on her with Hikka was one of the first ideas I had for this fic :3 I think Yuto didn't /want/ to be gay or bisexual in this fic, so he saw Hikka as someone with whom he couldn't get involved too deeply. In a nutshell, he was an ass :´D and a coward :'D (I'M SORRY YUTO I SWEAR I LOVE YOU).

Yabu uses sass to cover up his sadness? XDDD lol

I'm super happy you liked this <3 I love you
Thank you for this comment!! <3333