je_united 2019 - Gift fic for meikyuu_makeyou

[h_itoshi]

Je_united gift fic for meikyuu_makeyou

Title: More than just meeting your eyes
Pairing: Shibutani Subaru/Yasuda Shota with side pairings: Murakami Shingo/Yokoyama Yuu, Nishikido Ryo/Maruyama Ryuhei, Ohkura Tadayoshi/Kitayama Hiromitsu
Rating: NC17 just to be safe, or R+
Warnings: Written in 1st person from Yasu’s point of view. AU partially angsty universe

Comments

[ladyc2]

This was well done and really good. I love the idea of Yasu being completely blindfolded through his relationship (like it's a little weird usually, but something you could totally see Yasu actually just going along with). I was curious about why Subaru started to come to the cafe, and using sign language to communicate was brilliant (and Yasu knew how - again something you could totally see him picking up, just in case), but it was to protect Yasu in the end because he got too close to Subaru and that's sad and I'm glad that Yasu wasn't okay with it at first and realised they needed that time apart - but that he didn't regret it and recognised and loved the good parts about it that gave the relationship meaning. And the end leaves the promise of maybe getting back together on more equal terms later.

The cafe stuff provided a cute, fluffy backdrop to the relationship - I'm glad Ryo and Maru worked it out and enjoyed Ryo and Tacchon's fight about it.

[meikyuu_makeyou]

this. blew. my. mind.

the way the scenes played out, the conflict... the entire universe set around them - how yasu fits in with subaru, and how subaru finds a way to fit in with yasu.
i'm really glad the ending turned out this way, it's bittersweet in a way; yet more realistic than a happy ending :) the way you started the story and ended it in the same kind of concept and the reuse of the words. gooooosh, im lost for words... this is so so so beautiful ^w^ thank you

i loved this so so so much, and thank you so much for settling with my stubborn-ness of a yasuba (sorry!) but asdfghjkl
gosh, this is so so so pretty, it's beautiful... thank you so much for this QwQ i loved it.

/keyboard smash