Gift fic for misao_duo & razberrycreme

Dec 19, 2010 20:51

Recipients: razberrycreme and misao_duo

Title: hangdogs (9/9)

Pairing/Group: Hayato/Ryu (Gokusen 2)

Rating: R

Warnings: Spoilers for every single season of the Gokusen television series, for the Gokusen film, and a little tiny smidgen of the manga as well. Also, excessive hair ruffling, awkward silences, tense gazes, meaningful declarations about friendship and ( Read more... )

*rating: r, *drama: gokusen 2, odagiri ryu/yabuki hayato

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crazy_otaku911 December 20 2010, 05:07:33 UTC
... Ho damn. I have no words except... Oh my god, what is this... this... gigantically large thing. +_+ Brb, staring at the whole thing... in complete and utter awe

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crazy_otaku911 December 20 2010, 22:21:16 UTC
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ♥

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pithetaphish December 20 2010, 05:13:47 UTC
Over 70,000 words. In three months.

*scrapes jaw off the floor*

Anon-san, my hat goes off to you; you are amazing. But then, you knew that already ^_~

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pithetaphish December 20 2010, 19:14:11 UTC
i love you so much right now T_T

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pithetaphish December 21 2010, 03:52:47 UTC
Just finished.

Utterly speechless.

No comment of mine could ever do this justice. There are no adjectives sublime enough to describe, and the usual hyperboles feel cheap in the face of this. Your care and effort and affection for the characters in crafting and developing them throughout, as a teacher might do her wayward students... hon, I stand in awe.

Thank-you.

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razberrycreme December 20 2010, 07:20:12 UTC
“Ryu, you dumbass, I thought I’d never see you again,” Hayato breathes against his skin, arms wound so tight around Ryu’s torso it’s like he’s trying to suffocate him. “You know you can’t take anything I say seriously.”

Ryu mashes his nose into Hayato’s collar, so happy their lack of privacy doesn’t matter. “I forgot,” he says, half-tempted to kiss all the way up Hayato’s shank track, to take it back for himself.

Ryu thinks Hayato’s about to do something really embarrassing before Yankumi beats him to the chase. She comes over and throws her arms around both of them, mooshing a cheek into the gap between their arms.

“All these months I wanted to say something, and I never could!” Yankumi bawls. Ryu and Hayato try to pull away, but her grip around them is ridiculously strong. “All those months Odagiri was so sad and alone, and really Yabuki was waiting the entire time, hoping that he’d move on and be happy without him!”

“Yankumi…” grunts Hayato.

“You guys,” she sobs proudly, “this is the true meaning of friendship!”THIS IS SO ( ... )

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razberrycreme December 20 2010, 07:24:17 UTC
I'M LIKE SITTING HERE FEELING RIGHTEOUSLY INDIGNANT THAT THERE ISN'T ENOUGH PRAISE FOR YOU YET, DESPITE THE FACT THAT IT'S JUST BEEN POSTED AND IT'S REALLY LONG.

I HOPE YOU KNOW THAT YOU DESERVE LIKE...NOVEL-LENGTH PRAISE. IF I WERE ELOQUENT ENOUGH TO GIVE YOU BACK 70K WORTH OF PRAISE, I WOULD. Like my eloquent friend becquinho said, this is a ryu/hayato masterpiece. I LOVE THIS AND I HOPE YOU FEEL REALLY ACCOMPLISHED AND PROUD AND LIKE AN AWESOME WRITER, BECAUSE YOU ARE. :D THANK YOU FOR WRITING, AGAIN :D

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razberrycreme December 20 2010, 19:05:40 UTC
your compliments...they make me weepy...like, literally.

oh god, i am so glad you like it. it is literally the result of watching gokusen obsessively for a good month solid, trying to come up with hayaryu plots. it just...got...ridiculously out of control.

i have to admit, both you and misao_duo are two of my favorite writers. i really respect you guys, so this was a really big deal for me. especially because I ACTUALLY GAVE THEM A LEGIT MAKEOUT SCENE...O____O <---me, in fright.

anyway, i love you so MUCH and merry christmas and happy new year and i'm so glad you liked it, honestly, truly.

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razberrycreme December 20 2010, 19:57:50 UTC
HOPEFULLY IN A GOOD WAY T_T I rec'd your fic at my lj (and I never rec fic! :D) and my friends were all SOB, THIS IS AN AMAZING WORK OF ART, LET US PUT IT IN THE AKAME LOUVRE, or well I'm paraphrasing, but that is basically the general gist.

MONTH WELL SPENT O___O

Well misao_duo is pretty awesome. :D I mean, she def deserves your respect :D Keep on R-E-S-P-E-C-T-ing. I have no idea why you respect me. Stop that. LESS RESPECTING MORE WRITING.

THANK YOU SO MUCH T_T THIS WAS AN AWESOME PRESENT T_T I HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR AND REST FOR LIKE 2 MINUTES BEFORE YOU START WRITING ANOTHER EPIC FIC. I NEED MORE ALREADY T_T ♥

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katmillia December 20 2010, 07:37:19 UTC
Okay, so this is, hands down, just... amazing. Just fantastic. You made this them, you made this alive- and you made them boys, and men, and violent and stubborn and absolutely, heart-wrenchingly, painfully beautiful. Every single bit of this was just reeking of being alive and my god, so few fics can do that. Especially for a drama pairing, especially for something that isn't even- I don't even know, but this was just so many shades of fantastic I can't even explain to you how amazing it was.

I better know you. I'm serious. I better know you and already be creepily pouring out my love to you, because if I don't, watch out- you're getting it as soon as reveals come up.

Seriously. Thank you for this. ♥

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katmillia December 20 2010, 19:07:24 UTC
YOU HAVE NO IDEA THE DEPTHS OF MY LOVE FOR YOUR ENCOURAGEMENT RIGHT NOW T___________T

i hope you were amused by my ninja gary-stu casting: the world's best most sexiest gary-stu hisself

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becquinho December 20 2010, 08:41:24 UTC
I HAVE NO WORDS...YOU HAVE RENDERED ME UTTERLY INCOHERENT AND IN AWE OF EVERYTHING WORD WRITTEN HERE....TT_________________________________TT

THIS IS AN ABSOLUTE MASTERPIECE ♥

I WANT TO BUILD A SHRINE TO YOU AND HEAP LOVE ON YOU FOR ALL ETERNITY....this is mortifying if I know you and horrifically creepy if I don't >_>; but I'll stand by it ♥....you have my undying love and appreciation,gratitude, soul etc. for creating and writing this ♥

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becquinho December 20 2010, 19:09:37 UTC
you make me so happy ♥

a masterpiece? pssshhhhhh, whatever you are all making me cry

thank you so much. thank you tiemz a billion. happy holidays!

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