Gift fic for misao_duo & razberrycreme
Recipients: razberrycreme and misao_duo
Title: hangdogs (9/9)
Pairing/Group: Hayato/Ryu (Gokusen 2)
Rating: R
Warnings: Spoilers for every single season of the Gokusen television series, for the Gokusen film, and a little tiny smidgen of the manga as well. Also, excessive hair ruffling, awkward silences, tense gazes, meaningful declarations about friendship and ( Read more... )
Title: hangdogs (9/9)
Pairing/Group: Hayato/Ryu (Gokusen 2)
Rating: R
Warnings: Spoilers for every single season of the Gokusen television series, for the Gokusen film, and a little tiny smidgen of the manga as well. Also, excessive hair ruffling, awkward silences, tense gazes, meaningful declarations about friendship and ( Read more... )
Ryu mashes his nose into Hayato’s collar, so happy their lack of privacy doesn’t matter. “I forgot,” he says, half-tempted to kiss all the way up Hayato’s shank track, to take it back for himself.
Ryu thinks Hayato’s about to do something really embarrassing before Yankumi beats him to the chase. She comes over and throws her arms around both of them, mooshing a cheek into the gap between their arms.
“All these months I wanted to say something, and I never could!” Yankumi bawls. Ryu and Hayato try to pull away, but her grip around them is ridiculously strong. “All those months Odagiri was so sad and alone, and really Yabuki was waiting the entire time, hoping that he’d move on and be happy without him!”
“Yankumi…” grunts Hayato.
“You guys,” she sobs proudly, “this is the true meaning of friendship!”
THIS IS SO HILARIOUS AND TOUCHING AT THE SAME TIME <333
“I don’t want you hurt,” Hayato says fiercely. “You’ll probably get hurt.” He pauses. “Like, literally.”
It’s stupid and it’s cheesy and it’s corny, but Ryu’s learned that the stupid, cheesy, corny things are what make life worth it. Ryu doesn’t care who is listening; should never have cared that Hayato cares. This is all that matters.
“I will always protect you,” Ryu promises. “You didn’t let me last time, and look what happened.”
Hayato tries to look away; Ryu turns to press a thumb to his chin to make him listen.
“And I don’t care if you want me to or not,” he adds, tracing Hayato’s sharp, crooked jaw. “This will never happen again.”
“It might,” Hayato says.
Ryu shakes his head. “I will protect you,” he repeats.
Hayato draws a long breath, gaze rising to meet Ryu’s own. It takes him a while to collect himself, just as it always has. Ryu touches his hair; runs a hand down the back of his skull to rest at the nape of his neck, and Hayato leans back against him, sighing in what sounds almost like relief.
“You’re really stupid,” he says, “but I guess maybe I’ll let you.”
He turns into Ryu’s palm, nuzzling it.
I love this. (I ALMOST DON'T WANT TO DETRACT FROM HOW MUCH I LIKE IT WITH CAPS BUT I CAN'T HELP IT)
When Hayato climbs out of the car Tsucchi, Hyuuga, and Take attack him with the sheer force of their joy, knocking him back into the snow before dragging him inside. (“FORMATION F!” yells Hyuuga, and suddenly he’s being lifted onto their backs. As usual, Ryu has no idea what they’re talking about.)
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
Hayato begins demanding what Ryu’s doing when they stop in front of an old, familiar wooden house; he moans out loud.
“You’re kidding,” he says.
Ryu shrugs. “I missed you.”
“I left prison for this?“ Hayato yells. “Take me back.”
Ryu laughs and drags Hayato out of the street, tugging him whining and complaining up their old, rickety fire escape. He throws open the rabbit hole; pulls Hayato through it.
LMAO LMAO LMAO
“Why do you always stay?” Hayato asks, reaching up to trace the ridge of Ryu’s cheekbone; fingering Ryu’s chain that twinkles faintly in the moonlight.
He pulls Hayato down to sit beside him on the bed, slipping the hair tie from the nape of his neck. Ryu’s response is as quiet as a whisper in the darkness of a camping tent. “Because you’re the best person I know. You always have been, stupid.”
SOB.
There are no words for how much I love this fic. Thank you so much for writing, I hope you don't ever stop or think that you suck, because there is no way you could ever suck. You are awesome forever. Thank you for this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(In case you didn't notice, I LOVE IT.)
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I HOPE YOU KNOW THAT YOU DESERVE LIKE...NOVEL-LENGTH PRAISE. IF I WERE ELOQUENT ENOUGH TO GIVE YOU BACK 70K WORTH OF PRAISE, I WOULD. Like my eloquent friend becquinho said, this is a ryu/hayato masterpiece. I LOVE THIS AND I HOPE YOU FEEL REALLY ACCOMPLISHED AND PROUD AND LIKE AN AWESOME WRITER, BECAUSE YOU ARE. :D THANK YOU FOR WRITING, AGAIN :D
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oh god, i am so glad you like it. it is literally the result of watching gokusen obsessively for a good month solid, trying to come up with hayaryu plots. it just...got...ridiculously out of control.
i have to admit, both you and misao_duo are two of my favorite writers. i really respect you guys, so this was a really big deal for me. especially because I ACTUALLY GAVE THEM A LEGIT MAKEOUT SCENE...O____O <---me, in fright.
anyway, i love you so MUCH and merry christmas and happy new year and i'm so glad you liked it, honestly, truly.
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MONTH WELL SPENT O___O
Well misao_duo is pretty awesome. :D I mean, she def deserves your respect :D Keep on R-E-S-P-E-C-T-ing. I have no idea why you respect me. Stop that. LESS RESPECTING MORE WRITING.
THANK YOU SO MUCH T_T THIS WAS AN AWESOME PRESENT T_T I HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR AND REST FOR LIKE 2 MINUTES BEFORE YOU START WRITING ANOTHER EPIC FIC. I NEED MORE ALREADY T_T ♥
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