First try

[xiao_mei]

Title: Drabble Testing
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Uh.. right. First try at writing in a while.
Summary: Ruki

Comments

[chinesetakeout]

Wow. o___o
I don't know what I was really expecting, but you certainly proved everything wrong to me that I thought it would be.

That last line was just.. it spoke volumes.

[miyabi_is_dead]

T_T ...your ending was the winner... I love it ^^~

[murmeldyr]

amasing work, really. I'm impressed o.o

[andidp]

ohh, ouch ...

[japanesezombie]

I like the word use/imagery because it conveys alot without the use of dialogue. The very first sentence automatically makes you feel anxious and slightly sick.

I hadn't been expecting the ending either.

I recommend you write more!