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Re: Hands / Fingerless Gloves/ Fantasy of Mission Sex 3/3advectionOctober 30 2008, 02:08:32 UTC
Pointing with his chin, Daniel indicated the gloves. "Are those washable?" -- rotf!
It's totally cool how you aimed the whole fic at Daniel asking Jack to wear the gloves. Hot mission fantasy whoooo! And I adore that exchange at the end. Jack's reaction to Daniel's erection is so longtime-partner of him -- easygoing and tolerant right alongside the smirk -- and Daniel's so to-the-point and perfectly Daniel. And of course Jack has a request too! And now Daniel can get his work done. Win-win-win. :-) :-)
Any chance you could re-post your comment to the end of Cats' fic here? It's so good of you to leave feedback and I hate to make work for you, but that way she'll be sure of seeing it. Thanks, Deeds! :-)
Re: Jack as a voyeur (NC-17)chattycatsmeowOctober 30 2008, 21:35:51 UTC
Ooooooh, post-ascension fic! There's such sweetness and tenderness in this. I love that this is rediscovery for Daniel, and reassurance from Jack and a reaffirmation of what they still mean to each other.
Re: Jack as a voyeur (NC-17)chattycatsmeowOctober 31 2008, 11:24:18 UTC
Oh it works all right. The fact that he and Daniel are engaged in this together changes the tone of the voyeurism. Jack as still voyeur but with this scenario Daniel is an exhibitionist, even if he's only showing off for Jack. So, you've got two kinks going, all infused with love and concern.
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It's totally cool how you aimed the whole fic at Daniel asking Jack to wear the gloves. Hot mission fantasy whoooo! And I adore that exchange at the end. Jack's reaction to Daniel's erection is so longtime-partner of him -- easygoing and tolerant right alongside the smirk -- and Daniel's so to-the-point and perfectly Daniel. And of course Jack has a request too! And now Daniel can get his work done. Win-win-win. :-) :-)
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Deeds xx
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Thanks for the feedback! I love my kinky, old-married-couple OTP. Glad you do, too. :D
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Thanks!!
(Re-posting this comment 'cause I realized I wasn't sure which fic yours was intended for. :-))
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If you meant it for prehistoric_sea's story, then please ignore me as I slink off in embarrassment, m'kay? :-)
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Love!
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