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J/D Kinkathon

Oct 28, 2008 08:56

The Kinkathon post is now archived here with all the commentfics except a handful that had been deleted along with deleted LJ accounts before the comments were exported.

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Heart-wrenching sidlj October 31 2008, 15:57:53 UTC

Daniel blinked at his alarm clock. No reason to get up this early on a Saturday. He rolled over and his elbow hit something that said, “Oof ( ... )

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Re: Heart-wrenching sidlj October 31 2008, 17:55:32 UTC

It was 'sleepy morning sex with a side order of dub con.' :-)

Re: Heart-wrenching chattycatsmeow October 31 2008, 16:27:10 UTC

Ohhhh, sleep sex. Very creative way to work on dub con.

::snickers::

Poor Siler -he'll never know why he got transferred or why Jack is suddenly so mad at him. :D

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Pretty Baby 1/3 starglyph November 1 2008, 20:25:58 UTC

(It all stared with the nail polish but took a left at Albuquerque. Makeup. Hands. On a mission, in a tent. Jack as a voyeur while Daniel masturbates. Possibly more ( ... )

Re: Pretty Baby 2/3 starglyph November 1 2008, 20:26:53 UTC

Yeah. Sweet and tart. One could do worse describing Daniel, Daniel's skin, or Daniel's mouth. Jack's attention is drawn back to Daniel's fingers, sliding down the chubby pen. Daniel flips it, slides his painted fingertips down, flip, slide, flip, slide. His fingernails are a lighter shade of pink than his lips. "Baby" pink comes to mind. "Baby," the only-use-it-in-the-bedroom name, and it better have an orgasm on one end or the other. Daniel's nails shimmer like silk, looking wet, as if they'd just been sucked. Jack swallows hard. "You're not going to change my mind, Daniel. We start by kissing in an offworld tent and before you know it we'll be fucking in the locker room just to see if we can get away with it." And because Jack had just about figured out how to make that one happen. Even if he'd never do it ( ... )

Re: Pretty Baby 3/3 starglyph November 1 2008, 20:28:04 UTC

Jack shifts on his sleeping bag, adjusting the fabric on his thighs, trying to make more room for his erection. "Sara didn't wear makeup unless we were going out to dinner or something. If she was wearing it, I knew I'd be getting lucky later ( ... )

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Re: Promises, promises (NC-17) discodiva76 November 2 2008, 16:40:04 UTC

Oh...My....Goodness....

And soooooo Daniel......god I love those boys!!...

Am sitting here in the semi-darkness and I'm right in that room with them......I can feel the love and heat radiating from them right now!!!

Thank you sweetie...it's just perfect...

Deeds xxx

Re: Promises, promises (NC-17) chattycatsmeow November 2 2008, 17:05:08 UTC

oooooh I like this! *fans self*

I loooove Alpha Daniel taking control of Jack. I love that Daniel makes Jack come by telling Jack how much he loves what Jack does to him. And I especially love that this isn't about sex as much as love and the feelings they have for each other.

Re: Promises, promises (NC-17) advection November 2 2008, 17:51:29 UTC

“Hey, you, drowsy guy with the delicious-looking hard-on, you listening to me?” -- OMG I LOVE THAT LINE SO MUCH. CAPSLOCK OF LOOOOOVE.

Beautiful fic!

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Parking, lots sidlj November 2 2008, 20:18:28 UTC

They didn’t look at each other. They looked out the windshield, or they looked down, or they looked in the rearview mirrors, or they looked out the side windows.

They had to stay alert. What they were doing was dangerous.

But when you’re used to people shooting at you, danger tends to become a way of life.

Once a week, Jack and Daniel courted danger.

It had all started one night when they were having a few drinks at the bar nearest to Daniel’s place. An aggressive young woman kept coming on to Daniel, touching him, licking her lips, sending out sexual signals.

Daniel was initially polite to her, which probably was a mistake, since she wouldn’t give up.

Jack, finally, wasn’t.

Jack fucking staked his claimThe woman looked at him in astonishment, and a bit of fear, and went away ( ... )

Re: Parking, lots chattycatsmeow November 2 2008, 20:42:45 UTC

Oh wow! That first encounter was so spontaneous and so hot. It's interesting to see the progression as each encounter becomes closer and closer to public, flirting with exposure in EVERY sense of the word.

Re: Parking, lots sidlj November 2 2008, 20:51:34 UTC

You sum it up very neatly. :-)

They were out of control that first time, and now that they're planning and being careful... they're completely out of control.

Re: Parking, lots advection November 2 2008, 21:42:04 UTC

Duuuude, that is scorching hot. Love it.

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Going UP (Accidental Frottage/Storeroom Sex/ Rated R) 1/2 chattycatsmeow November 3 2008, 02:53:31 UTC

"Carter? You running away from home?" Frowning, Jack backed farther into the elevator ( ... )

Re: Going UP (Accidental Frottage/Storeroom Sex/ Rated R) 2/2 chattycatsmeow November 3 2008, 02:54:35 UTC

Daniel clutched his notebook tightly as he pushed Jack away. "On base?" he hissed in a whisper. "What the hell is wrong with you?"

"Jesus, Daniel," griped Jack in a low voice as he lifted his shirt to show off the outline of his erection, "have you no shame? Blatantly feeling me up with your ass right in front of Carter and T-man!"

"ME? You stuck your crotch on my ass," complained Daniel.

"You rubbed your ass on my crotch!"

"You're the one who put me there. YOU pulled me in front of you like that."

"Well, you didn't have to wiggle"I was trying to move away from you, to...to...to put as much distance between us I could ( ... )

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Re: Going UP (Accidental Frottage/Storeroom Sex/ Rated R) 2/2 chattycatsmeow November 3 2008, 23:27:13 UTC

Heee! Sorry 'bout that. :D

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