Redemption Interlude - Turning Saints Into the Sea

[jcrgirl]

Timothy David Olyphant was born in Atlanta, Georgia on an unseasonably cold day in May. He was his parents’ first and only child, a fact his mother had made abundantly clear to her husband on hearing she was pregnant. He’d better hope it was a son because she was only going to misshape her beauty queen body once in an attempt to give him an heir.

Comments

[betahimetsukiko]

Oh balls, I am so freaked out about what awaits Jensen in Denver and what that bastard Timothy is going to do to Jared.

[jcrgirl]

As you should be. Thanks for reading!

[moonlessnightz]

Aww poor jared D:

[jcrgirl]

Yep!

[slf630]

Holy crap. That was... Wow. I mean, I hated Timothy just from what I've read already but that just made me hate him even more. God, what a dick. This was brilliant though, m'dear. A truly chilling look into the mind of a psychopath. I can't wait to see more - even though I know it's gonna get rough for a while - I know that the HEA will be there (and I still believe that Jensen's really the twins' father and it'll be awesome when it comes out. ;P) Thank so much for sharing, looking forward to more as always. :)

[jcrgirl]

I'm glad you liked it. I was worried how people would take it but I wanted to show Jared's life with Timothy and set up for the next chapter. You know me, I like outsider POV. Thanks for reading.

[aerynsun5]

I thought you must have run away from home!

Thanks for the update. Interesting to see a little of Timothy's background. Where are we going next, I wonder?

[jcrgirl]

Nope, still here! I've just been working a bunch, but they're talking about moving me to a night truck - my call volume will go down and I'll have more time to write! Plus, I'm working on a super-secret J2 AU based on Firefly when I'm not doing this ;)

As for where we are going next? With me, you know its nowhere good.

[sandycub]

This was a really great look into the history between Jensen and Timothy and how the animosity between them grew. It is also quite the insight into why/how Timothy is the way he is. It was heartbreaking to see how Jared ended up being in the position that he was, being abused and broken the way he was. I am looking forward to the coming chapter where Jensen and Jared realize that Timothy has found Jared. I cannot wait until Jared and Jensen find out that the twins are actually Jensen's children!!

[jcrgirl]

I wanted to show how big, strong Jared ended up with a creep like Timothy. I'm glad it worked. I was worried doing from his perspective. Things will be heating up in the next chapter.