Comments | jcrgirl: Redemption Interlude - Turning Saints Into the Sea

jcrgirl

Redemption Interlude - Turning Saints Into the Sea

Apr 14, 2013 23:16

Timothy David Olyphant was born in Atlanta, Georgia on an unseasonably cold day in May. He was his parents’ first and only child, a fact his mother had made abundantly clear to her husband on hearing she was pregnant. He’d better hope it was a son because she was only going to misshape her beauty queen body once in an attempt to give him an heir. ( Read more... )

mpreg, abuse, redemption, imogen's bunny ranch, dub-con, j2, hurt/comfort, non-con

Comments 37

geri April 15 2013, 09:20:20 UTC

Damn he done flipped his wig! If he thinks Jensen will stand by idly by while he hurts jared or the twins............. Great post.......bb's

jcrgirl April 15 2013, 12:43:40 UTC

I agree. Timothy has another thing coming. Before Jensen didn't know, but now....

Thanks for reading

ferrous_wheeler April 15 2013, 10:30:35 UTC

That was incredibly intense! Great how you've outlined the development of a psychopath (sociopath?) and how he managed to slowly take over Jared's life. I'm sure that the twins are Jensens' and hope that his convention is cut short!
Great update!

jcrgirl April 15 2013, 12:44:45 UTC

Thanks! I can promise the convention will be cut short...just not for the reason you're hoping :)

glimmerella April 15 2013, 11:23:53 UTC

What a great character study. I *almost* for a few fleeting seconds felt sorry for Timothy. This interlude is perfectly place in what I know is going to be a very intense climax.

jcrgirl April 15 2013, 12:45:50 UTC

Thank you, bb. I'm tickled you liked it.

frostfalcon April 15 2013, 12:15:05 UTC

This is getting fairly intense, I can't wait to see what happens and I hope that Tim eventually gets what's coming to him.

jcrgirl April 15 2013, 12:46:20 UTC

Thanks for reading!

dimeliora April 15 2013, 15:05:36 UTC

Ok one? I knew they were Jensen's kids! Hah!

This was amazing. Brutal, dark, thick. Holy crap. The part about how he learns his lessons regarding compassion and fairness just blew me away.

Also, I'm from the South, and I chuckled heartily when he thought being Atlanta royalty would mean anything in Savannah.

Now I need more again. I should have spaced this out with a paragraph a day...

jcrgirl April 30 2013, 17:06:32 UTC

Glad you liked it!

How could Jensen possibly be the father when Timothy had proof? *bats eyelashes innocently*

I'm from the south too and love Atlanta and Savannah equally. I was always amazed at how different they were.

More coming soon, I promise, and things are going to be heating up!