"Because of You I'm Breaking" [Chapter 15] Fin.

Apr 10, 2010 16:34


Title: "Because of You I'm Breaking" [Chapter 15]

Author: JCapzona

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Callie/Arizona

Disclaimer: All television shows and other copyrighted material referred to in this work, and the characters, settings ext. are the properties of their respective owners. This work is non-profit and simply written for fun. Reference to persons, ( Read more... )

fanfic, calzona, arizona, greys anatomy, arizona robbins, callie, sara ramirez, grey's anatomy, robbins, callie torres, jessica capshaw

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ifabi April 11 2010, 01:45:13 UTC
HOLY. MARY. MOTHER. OF. JESUS.
Arizona Robbins has an Audi and street races.
Can I say .... orgasm?

This was hot ,mind-blowing ,insane -- you know what? FUCK NADIA. Arizona Robbins is a freaking legend!! She is The Legend. I'm .... How the hell Callie didn't came right there? I mean let's be honest, seeing McPerky practically doing the McNasty ,because I think hot and fast cars equals sex, the woman has some willpower.

Well ,what in trying to say is that THIS was the best heart-stopping jaw-dropping hot-as-hell fic I've ever read.

Ps: next time make Az run for the pink's! Hehe

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jcapzona April 11 2010, 07:08:53 UTC
Yes you can say.
Honestly, AZ street racing any car is pure sex. But the R8 is just the cherry on top of it all =)

Fuck Nadia? LOL What can I say, Nadia learned from the best! Arizona's a legend for a reason you know!

Girls don't like guys girls like CARSSS & money!

I'm glad you liked this fic, I tried to make the ending as hot as I could =)But in the end, it was all AZ <3

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ifabi April 11 2010, 10:01:28 UTC
"Girls don't like guys girls like CARSSS & money!" and Girls. LOL

I think i'm gonna make an icon with that.

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jcapzona April 11 2010, 10:31:51 UTC
Hahah you shouldd!!! I like your current icon though =) It needs more Arizona though lol.

LMao "& GIRLS."

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charm3d87 April 11 2010, 01:56:52 UTC
K,

a breathtaking ending to an incredible story.

nothing but compliments and admiration for your writing.

the thrill, the plot, the characters. everything was superb. you have a command of your words and characters allowing us to be exactly where they are, feeling exactly what they're feeling.

and i don't usually leave comments like these. i just usually go woot! woot! update-ish =) lol.

so to one half of team McAwesomeWriters (coliebearz, I'm still waiting for your update) , I put up a toast! OF TEQUILA!

Congratulations on a job well done!

xoxo

Gossip GIrl ;p

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jcapzona April 11 2010, 07:06:23 UTC
Awww thankss =) I'm glad you enjoyed it! It means a lot coming from you cause I know you're not an avid commenter haha~!

TEQUILLA? oOoOH I'm in. I'm soo in.

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charm3d87 April 11 2010, 11:26:31 UTC
i want a black berry! whaa so out of context !

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jcapzona April 11 2010, 22:12:32 UTC
LOL If you black berry too much you will one day become a prune. A shriveled old prune.

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mc_maverick April 11 2010, 01:59:04 UTC
Well. Worth. The Wait. I can't even come up with anything to describe the awesomeness that is this fic. The white Audi R8 (I like to call it a sugar cube) is one sexy ass car. Arizona driving said sexy ass car is straight sauce. This fic was hot. That's all my mind can come up with right now because my mind is seriously blown.

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jcapzona April 11 2010, 07:04:46 UTC
Thankss! Sorry for making you guys wait~! Oooohh sugar cube? Sounds sexy haha- LOVE IT! But yeah, I LOVE the white Audi R8, it's like my dream car! But since I'm an impoverished university student I can only drive it in my writing haha. But yeah...AZ driving it = PURE SEX. Thanksss for car crushin' with me =)

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mc_maverick April 12 2010, 06:00:58 UTC
No problemo. I'll car crush with you anytime Especially if it's a car like that!

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jcapzona April 12 2010, 06:49:55 UTC
haha i can't get over the fact that you call it a "sugar cube" it's like the most PERFECT description for it!

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kicks_316 April 11 2010, 02:48:56 UTC
A-a-awesome! I was so excited. Man, I've been waiting for this for what feels like forever!

Street-racing, foul-mouthed, leather-clad lothario Arizona Robbins makes me want to have a party in my panties. LOL! She can OHKO me anytime. :D

Loved the Tony Award reference. You had me laughing so hard with that.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading "Because of You I'm Breaking". Thank you so much. YOU are legendary. :)

PS: I was also happy to see you had an update because now coliebearz can't use your not updating as an excuse. ^_^

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jcapzona April 11 2010, 07:01:42 UTC
Haha yeahh sorry, I had an interruption in the form of a controversial English paper. Grodie, I know.

YESS X) Street-racing AZ is sex on wheels. I LOVED writing that part.

& Haha yeahh I had to throw in the Toy Award reference in for the Callie fans! You're super awesome for catching that! Just...SUPER!

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kicks_316 April 11 2010, 14:23:41 UTC
I was half-expecting a breakout into "Diva's Lament". Well, it happened in my head anyway.

I can't wait for your next fic! Fangirl right here. :)

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jcapzona April 11 2010, 22:16:15 UTC
LOLOOLOLOL OMG hahaha that would've been priceless. But I have no idea how that could possibly fit in the context of barfing while AZ street raced... but still LOL. I totally choked on my food when I read your comment.

At least it happened in your head =)

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iamyouknowiam April 11 2010, 02:59:32 UTC
Ok, you? Are awesome.

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jcapzona April 11 2010, 06:58:45 UTC
& you? Are McAWESOME =)

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iamyouknowiam April 11 2010, 18:49:03 UTC
LOL that's high praise for someone who is too lazy to write their own fics (besides in my head) and therefore just reads other people's and basks in their SUPER McAWESOMENESS!!! :)

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jcapzona April 11 2010, 22:17:35 UTC
LOLL There would be no point for people to write fanfics if no one's reading them!

But if you start writing mcAwesome fanfics too? That wouldn't hurt either X)

Just sayin'

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