Comments | jbmaunier: if the pieces fit

jbmaunier

if the pieces fit

Mar 23, 2011 20:38

if the pieces fit
1,837 words | 2min
Sometimes twelve steps are a lifetime away.

( Taemin is six years old and Minho is eight. They’re best friends and when you’re six years old, that’s all that matters. )

shinee, !fanfic, 2min

Comments 16

allafloat March 25 2011, 19:11:48 UTC

Totally did not anticipate that ending (def wasn't prepared for the full on angst D:) but it was beautiful nonetheless. Loved how you ended it through Yoogeun's POV. Glad Tae moved on somehow but I could still feel Minho's longing for him and oh the heartache is straight to the bones.
*mems* ♥

babysponge March 26 2011, 01:43:40 UTC

oh God this is so beautiful. I... I can't even. I'm so speechless rn!

thank you so much for sharing! /put this in my memories 4eva

fay_of_sunshine June 19 2011, 08:12:41 UTC

this was so beautiful. ugh, my heart hurts.

blackvignette June 19 2011, 14:32:47 UTC

Aw this was a beautiful fic, I love how you used age to reflect their personality, and you wrote their characters perfectly. :)

sometimes twelve steps are a lifetime away. Favourite line by far! It seems to describe and sum up the whole fic.

I must seem so incoherent lol but that really was amazing. Thank you for sharing! :)

suntaem September 11 2011, 17:12:08 UTC

I keep reading the last part over and over again.
I want to cry so badly but I just can't because this is so beautiful.
I loved this so much.

<3