Morning Routinesext_2689164August 5 2014, 00:32:50 UTC
Thanks for this, Jo! I post my bit just as it already is in this draft of my MS, because your post made me think of it right away. Looking through it, I already see where I should tighten it up to give purpose
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Thank you so much, Jo! You really got me thinking - which I thought I'd already done - a lot - about the purpose of this section. Which got me thinking about other sections... That's why I love Teachers Write. :-)
Thank you so much, Jo! You really got me thinking - which I thought I'd already done - a lot - about the purpose of this section. Which got me thinking about other sections... That's why I love Teachers Write. :-) Now I don't know if it's posted, so sorry for double if I do it after signing in.
Hi,I know I'm way to late for feedback, but I still wanted to post that I appreciate your post. Loved the line at the end that every word and description needs to earn their place on the page. Good one to remember. I'm not sure that I've accomplished that here, but I will keep working on it
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Good morning, Jo- Sorry to post late. I love this prompt and will save it for later. I can write this weekend and hope to get to know my character better using your suggestions. I remember practicing something similar last year in TW, and wow, what a difference in made in the depth of writing about that character. I hope you have a great week!
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Sorry to post late. I love this prompt and will save it for later. I can write this weekend and hope to get to know my character better using your suggestions. I remember practicing something similar last year in TW, and wow, what a difference in made in the depth of writing about that character. I hope you have a great week!
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