You want it- baby, I got it: WINTER

Nov 23, 2010 02:43

Author: jazz_trousers  
Title: WINTER- Shiver
Rating: 18+... Sex and language. All the good stuff.
Pairing: Renji/Ichigo
Warnings: Unbeta'd, fluff, edging on PWP
Summary: "I can see your nipples through that shirt."

Now if I wasn't such a weenie do you think you'd still love me, pretending I'm an airplane on the living room floor~ )

sex, bleach, writing, yaoi

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clinicly8insane November 23 2010, 03:38:22 UTC
*NOMZ FOREVER* I miss this paring. And now is the perfect time for in since Renji may be the only one Ichigo will see.
AH~ So lovely *__* I like the POV changes~

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jazz_trousers November 23 2010, 03:46:12 UTC
Aaahh first comment!! *jumps up and down*
Omg don't even get me started on that shit. Kubo, why are you doing this to us?? ;___;
Thank you so so much *gives you tea and cheesecake cuz it's cold as hell*

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clinicly8insane November 23 2010, 08:16:17 UTC
*HUGS FOREVER*

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jazz_trousers November 23 2010, 16:05:37 UTC
*MAXIMUM LOVEAGE*

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writerx75 November 23 2010, 04:11:34 UTC
I love how you managed to make this sweet, hot, funny, and wisecracking all at the same time...much like these two, actually. XD Between Renji's really inappropriate comments and Ichigo's almost perpetual annoyance, the way you write how they interact is just way too much fun. I also really liked they way we get to hear from both of them in this piece, especially during the smexy bits because I love hearing the way they think about each other. Very yummy, brain-melting sex and just a fabulous piece all around. I think I feel warmer now. :D

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jazz_trousers November 23 2010, 04:17:29 UTC
That is so lovely to hear, thank you!! ^_^ I wanted to kick off the Four Seasons on a high note, y'know?
I have to admit, I had a lot of fun writing the banter between them. That little exchange about the various colours of people's nipples is based on a genuine conversation I once overheard on a train xD
Sex = the best way to warm up. Or so I hear *forever alone*

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aurorarose1414 November 23 2010, 06:49:26 UTC
I thought this was beautiful and irreverent; a perfect mix! I don't see a lot of Renji/Ichigo pairings anymore and they're my OTP so it's great to see someone writing them. ^_^

I liked how you mixed together their humor and playfulness with sincere, touching moments. The sex scene was hot! Definitely a great way to warm up in this cold weather, hahaha.

Great job! I look forward to reading more from you.

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jazz_trousers November 23 2010, 16:07:38 UTC
Awww wow, thanks! That's awesome! ^_^
I love writing these guys, in my mind they never quite know if they want to fight or make out lol

Thank you again, there are three more seasons (different pairings though) to come so watch out for them!

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figaro_figaro November 23 2010, 07:20:27 UTC
Fucking livejournal ate my comment. Anyways. Just wanted to let you know this was a rather nice way to wake up this morning. :3 Hot and sweet. I loved it when Renji discussed Ichigo's nipples. Yeah, I think that was my favorite part. :3 (Appropriate icon is appropriate.)

Good job!

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jazz_trousers November 23 2010, 16:09:14 UTC
That is immensely flattering coming from you, "Birds and The Bees" is one of my favourite RenIchi pieces of ALL TIME *___*
Thanks so much!

OMG that icon- *tweak tweak* haha <3

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figaro_figaro November 24 2010, 06:59:48 UTC
D'aww, thanks. :3 Glad you liked that one.

Funniest interpretation of that icon was a friend suggesting he actually thinks he's doing those 'air quotes' but doing it wrong. I imagine Ichigo first trying to figure out what the fuck he's doing, and then laughing his ass off when he figures it out. XD

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tylashke November 23 2010, 09:04:08 UTC
The start was hilarious and I loved how Renji wants to protect Ichigo now. ^^ Cheers to a good start to the 'seasons' fics.

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jazz_trousers November 23 2010, 16:10:27 UTC
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed!!
I am really looking forward to writing the next three, stay tuned :3

Also your icon- Ichigo's nips! Yay!

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