You want it- baby, I got it: WINTER

[jazz_trousers]

Author: jazz_trousers  
Title: WINTER- Shiver
Rating: 18+... Sex and language. All the good stuff.
Pairing: Renji/Ichigo
Warnings: Unbeta'd, fluff, edging on PWP
Summary: "I can see your nipples through that shirt."

Comments

[chorus_of_chaos]

This was all around awesome, but this...this...

"to reveal black briefs with loud, neon print proclaiming, "ORGASM DONOR" under a medical cross that strains obscenely over the bulge beneath. "

literally had me howling and pounding on my desk with laughter, the cats ran and hid under the china cabinet and the dog went to the back door and looked out like maybe she was hoping somerone would come save her from the crazy person.

excellent smut AND humor, are always made of win.

[jazz_trousers]

For serious? Wow!! I'm so happy I could make anyone laugh like that! Now to convince my friends IRL I'm that funny... XD

I want Orgasm Donor boxers like you wouldn't believe, even though I don't have a bulge to fill them out haha!

[chorus_of_chaos]

oh dear god, I'm not dyslexic but I initially saw that as Orgasm boner doxers in the reply (I do not know why) and died laughing again :)

Hey, I don't know why we chicks couldn't have orgasm donor knickers, especially all silky lacy ones, right?

[bunnysquee]

aawww ... this was cute and also hot! love renji being all protective and ichigo all tsundere - hahah!

thank you for writing and sharing.

[jazz_trousers]

Thanks!! Thank you for reading and commenting, it makes me so happy :3

[only_dani]

oh gods this was hot! and just what I needed since it's hitting the below zero C area where I live. I'm all warmed up now.

I really like the 1st person POV, and I really liked that you switched it up, I was able to get a good look at what each of them were thinking, and you did their banter really well.

omg Renji's mouth, so so dirty and so so delicious lol.

[jazz_trousers]

Yay~ thanks!! Yeah it's freezing here too :/

I'm glad you thought that worked, I had a major confidence wobble when I was writing it haha. Dirty talkin' Renji is always necessary.

(I don't know if it's because it's 6am and I just rolled in drunk but your icon = LMAO XDDDDD)

[0_xrosax_0]

Lovely~ I love the way it turned out!! It warmed me right up too~ xD d(^_^)b

[jazz_trousers]

Glad you liked it!! *warm squishy hug* You deserve some of the credit for this cuz you had to put up with my complaining the whole time I wrote it lol <3

[0_xrosax_0]

No problem~ I'd be happy to help anytime! ^_^ If you ever need some encouragement or ideas just ask. <3

[iamshadowhearts]

I love your story! Renji was a lot of in mind about Ichigo. Huh? ;> I like you turn each pov. I want another story! Also I see Renji dress from that image...Actually Renji is really fit a dress as sexy!

[jazz_trousers]

Thanks very much! I liked choosing his clothes ^_^