Competition: Part 5

[jayneswoman]

Title: In Jayne’s Bunk
Series Title: Competition
Author: Jayneswoman
Rating: NC17
Fandom: Firefly
Word Count: 882
Summary: Malcontent: Jayne and Mal compete for River’s affection.
Warning: The aim of Malcontent is to put Mal through as many painful situations as possible.
Disclaimer: Joss is Boss. I’m just borrowing his characters for fun!!

Authors Note

Comments

[jayneswoman]

Thanks honey! My first phew comment... *grin*

Now to all those who hate what I'm doing to River in my other fic....

This is river and Jayne gettin' it on. & you know they will get to sexin' real soon, don't you?

Glad you enjoyed it, jaynedancing!!

[jayneswoman]

Thanks, m'dear!

River will get it together and choose real soon...

[romanceguru]

Very racy stuff girly! River's a little tease. I like how Jayne understood that she didn’t know any better. Love the last line!

If you don't mind a little con-crit...I cannot really see Jayne being ok with River messing with Mal. Maybe, a little more conflicting emotions and frustration on Jayne’s part?

[jayneswoman]

I agree - we will see Jayne's frustration/anger in upcoming posts.

Patience, gentle reader. Frustrated! and Angry!Jayne coming soon....

BTW, I think Jayne was not angry here because he was having too much fun with River - who seems very willing for our Merc ;D

Thanks for the con-crit. Isn't it cool when we're thinking in the same wavelength?!!

[angel932]

Poor Mal, he doesn't have a chance! This is so fun to read; I'm looking forward to the next part.

[jayneswoman]

Thanks, hon! It's fun to write, too!

[chellziez]

Nice story, I'm not usually a fan of Jayne/River but I really enjoyed this fic!

P.S. The link for Nightrain has been updated it's now http://files.filefront.com/The_Train_Jobwmv/;5478072;;/fileinfo.html

Thanks for your comment!

[jayneswoman]

Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

Cheers for the fan vid link. *hugs*