BSG FanFic: Rebellion, Chapter 9/?

Apr 14, 2007 16:41

Title: Rebellion
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lee/kara, bsg fanfic, rebellion

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tracyj23 April 14 2007, 21:15:44 UTC
Ooh, lots of action in this chapter. Makes me happy ... I like action. :)

But where is Lee? *sniffles* I'm really missing him. I hope he finds Kara and Thea soon.

I liked the Adama/Tigh interaction at the end. There's never enough of that on the show and you had their voices down perfectly.

Favourite bit - "" He couldn’t just leave them behind. But it wasn’t just about them. It was about Laura. It was about Chief Tyrol and Cally and their boy. It was about them and the other ten thousand survivors of the human race that had settled on New Caprica. Surely Saul realized that. ""

Looking forward to the next chapter. (No, I'm not pushing, really). :)

Sorry you're feeling crappy - would a massage from Jamie help? I can send him a message ... :)

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jatnj April 14 2007, 21:39:32 UTC
"Ooh, lots of action in this chapter. Makes me happy ... I like action. :)" ~~ Yay! Action is good.

"I liked the Adama/Tigh interaction at the end. There's never enough of that on the show and you had their voices down perfectly." ~~ Thank you. I take that as a big compliment. It helps the story seem more 'realistic' if the writer gets the characters right.

"Favourite bit - "" He couldn’t just leave them behind.
But it wasn’t just about them. It was about Laura. It was about Chief Tyrol and Cally and their boy. It was about them and the other ten thousand survivors of the human race that had settled on New Caprica. Surely Saul realized that. """ ~~ *g*

"But where is Lee? *sniffles* I'm really missing him. I hope he finds Kara and Thea soon." ~~ Next chapter, I promise.

"Sorry you're feeling crappy - would a massage from Jamie help? I can send him a message ... :)" ~~ *nods emphatically* I need to take something for this headache.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hopefully I can start on ch10 soon. :D

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tracyj23 April 14 2007, 22:25:57 UTC
""I take that as a big compliment. It helps the story seem more 'realistic' if the writer gets the characters right. "" ~~ It most certainly does. And you do!

I'll send Jamie right along. Maybe by the time he arrives your painkillers will have taken effect and you'll already be feeling good. :)

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jatnj April 14 2007, 22:32:59 UTC
"Maybe by the time he arrives your painkillers will have taken effect and you'll already be feeling good. :)" ~~ oh, you mean the ones I didn't take yet, because I don't feel like getting off the chair? Actually the headache's gone, but my back is achin', so a Jamie massage will be just the thing I need right about now. :D

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suffolkgirl April 14 2007, 22:20:59 UTC
Glad to see Sam trying to make amends for his mistakes. And hurray, the cavalry showed up! Poor Bill, though, discovering all his family have disappeared.

But - but - what's happened to LEE??

You're very mean to keep me hanging on to find out. :)

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jatnj April 14 2007, 22:23:49 UTC
"But - but - what's happened to LEE??

You're very mean to keep me hanging on to find out. :)" ~~~ lol! Yes I am very mean. Next chapter though, I promise. :D

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rjsteamboat76 April 14 2007, 22:27:53 UTC
good job!! waiting for the next chapter. great story J! =D

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jatnj April 14 2007, 22:30:27 UTC
Thanks LB. The next chapter is started.....:D

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fadingphantom April 15 2007, 07:31:25 UTC
*sigh* so Anders is going back to lead the resistance, getting off scott-free for all he’s done… while Lee is god knows where. I understand why he did it, but I dislike him too much right now to just let it go. At least Tyrol and Gaeta think he’s acting suss…

And I second (third?) that about Lee… when do we get to find out about our boy?

Also, I just re-read chapters 7 and 8 while listening to How to Save a Life by The Fray... big mistake. *cries*
I'm very very sad right now. :(

xo

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jatnj April 15 2007, 14:05:20 UTC
We'll find out about Lee in the next chapter, I promise.

As much as I like Sam and I believe he's truly remorseful about what he did and does intend to make up for it, he deserves his come uppance, and will get it eventually.

" Also, I just re-read chapters 7 and 8 while listening to How to Save a Life by The Fray... big mistake. *cries*
I'm very very sad right now. :(" ~~ hands you a tissue. Jamie will be there in his towel to cheer you up. :D

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jatnj April 16 2007, 10:23:55 UTC
I'm not sure Sam got off so easily. I'm still trying to work that out.

Lee's in the next chapter, I swear, though a little worse for wear, I'm afraid.

Of cours Papadama is gonna save the day. His peeps are in trouble! :D

Thanks so much for the review. It's much appreciated.

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