BSG FanFic: Rebellion, Chapter 9/?

Apr 14, 2007 16:41

Title: Rebellion
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lee/kara, bsg fanfic, rebellion

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tracyj23 April 14 2007, 21:15:44 UTC
Ooh, lots of action in this chapter. Makes me happy ... I like action. :)

But where is Lee? *sniffles* I'm really missing him. I hope he finds Kara and Thea soon.

I liked the Adama/Tigh interaction at the end. There's never enough of that on the show and you had their voices down perfectly.

Favourite bit - "" He couldn’t just leave them behind. But it wasn’t just about them. It was about Laura. It was about Chief Tyrol and Cally and their boy. It was about them and the other ten thousand survivors of the human race that had settled on New Caprica. Surely Saul realized that. ""

Looking forward to the next chapter. (No, I'm not pushing, really). :)

Sorry you're feeling crappy - would a massage from Jamie help? I can send him a message ... :)

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jatnj April 14 2007, 21:39:32 UTC
"Ooh, lots of action in this chapter. Makes me happy ... I like action. :)" ~~ Yay! Action is good.

"I liked the Adama/Tigh interaction at the end. There's never enough of that on the show and you had their voices down perfectly." ~~ Thank you. I take that as a big compliment. It helps the story seem more 'realistic' if the writer gets the characters right.

"Favourite bit - "" He couldn’t just leave them behind.
But it wasn’t just about them. It was about Laura. It was about Chief Tyrol and Cally and their boy. It was about them and the other ten thousand survivors of the human race that had settled on New Caprica. Surely Saul realized that. """ ~~ *g*

"But where is Lee? *sniffles* I'm really missing him. I hope he finds Kara and Thea soon." ~~ Next chapter, I promise.

"Sorry you're feeling crappy - would a massage from Jamie help? I can send him a message ... :)" ~~ *nods emphatically* I need to take something for this headache.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hopefully I can start on ch10 soon. :D

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tracyj23 April 14 2007, 22:25:57 UTC
""I take that as a big compliment. It helps the story seem more 'realistic' if the writer gets the characters right. "" ~~ It most certainly does. And you do!

I'll send Jamie right along. Maybe by the time he arrives your painkillers will have taken effect and you'll already be feeling good. :)

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jatnj April 14 2007, 22:32:59 UTC
"Maybe by the time he arrives your painkillers will have taken effect and you'll already be feeling good. :)" ~~ oh, you mean the ones I didn't take yet, because I don't feel like getting off the chair? Actually the headache's gone, but my back is achin', so a Jamie massage will be just the thing I need right about now. :D

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tracyj23 April 14 2007, 22:38:14 UTC
Glad to hear it. :) Enjoy!!

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