yeah... I am so in love with this story I have no words for it. I think its terribly cruel of leoben to be twisting reality like he is, and poor Thea, if in fact it IS Thea. I was squicked out by the whole "take me to bed" but hey, shes living in lala land with no way out and no way to act on the suspicion that all is not as it seems. PLEASE, let the next chap give a little info on Lee. I am really worried about him. :-(
yeah... I am so in love with this story I have no words for it. ~~ *g*
Leoben is very good at twisting reality, and he's got poor Kara not knowing which way is up. Thea is Thea. She recognized Kara and knows her father is outside.
I was squicked out by the whole "take me to bed" ~~ I was squicked out writing it, but Kara's trying to force things to get 'back to normal,' even though they aren't.
PLEASE, let the next chap give a little info on Lee. I am really worried about him. :-( ~~ *whistles*
you how i say i can handle K/L, but only in small doses? this was a very very good dose. =) i like how the story's coming along. great job as always J! =D
Apparently, I sent my comment to the last poster instead of to you, Janet. I have no idea how, but it IS late. LOL. So I deleted it, and I'm writing anew.
Anyway, it basically said : LOVE it. Thea is cute. But I get the willies from Leoben/Kara sex. :P
Yeah, I knew something was up. I wasn't sure about the first time, since it was late. But the 2nd time, I knew I hit YOUR "tell me what you think" button.
That was errily awesome! Poor Kara - she's so close to remembering the truth and then each time she thinks of Lee ... Leoben shows up to confuse her more.
How great is Thea? Fantastic! She knows her daddy - and Leoben isn't it! I hope she can lead Kara to the truth.
I never noticed before (blonde I guess) that Lee and Leoben are so close name-wise ... strange coincidence.
Great chapter - I'm glad you were able to resurrect it after your computers untimely illness. :D
I did. In fact I was very careful to after reading your message to Roofietoof. There must be something else wrong. Maybe you and Janet should check your settings to see why the comments are going to you. There are going to her as well as she answered me too.
How great is Thea? Fantastic! She knows her daddy - and Leoben isn't it!I hope she can lead Kara to the truth. ~~ Thea is a daddy's girl, but she's a little fireball like her mother. Too bad she can't talk, though Leoben might rue the day he reuinited those two, regardless.
I never noticed before (blonde I guess) that Lee and Leoben are so close name-wise ... strange coincidence. ~~ The whole Leoben/Lee name similarity thing didn't hit me until I started writing this - and I'm not blonde..I was born blonde-maybe that counts. :D
I'm glad you were able to resurrect it after your computers untimely illness. ~~ Me too! It's not exact, obviously, but the basic components are there. And it's easier to concentrate, stitting in a quiet room with only the PC.
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Anyways, GREAT chap!!!
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Leoben is very good at twisting reality, and he's got poor Kara not knowing which way is up. Thea is Thea. She recognized Kara and knows her father is outside.
I was squicked out by the whole "take me to bed" ~~ I was squicked out writing it, but Kara's trying to force things to get 'back to normal,' even though they aren't.
PLEASE, let the next chap give a little info on Lee. I am really worried about him. :-( ~~ *whistles*
Anyways, GREAT chap!!! ~~ Thank you!
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I am glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the feedback.
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Anyway, it basically said : LOVE it. Thea is cute. But I get the willies from Leoben/Kara sex. :P
Can't wait for more. :)
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I'm glad you loved the chapter. Leoben/Kara sex is creepy - no way around that. :D
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How great is Thea? Fantastic! She knows her daddy - and Leoben isn't it! I hope she can lead Kara to the truth.
I never noticed before (blonde I guess) that Lee and Leoben are so close name-wise ... strange coincidence.
Great chapter - I'm glad you were able to resurrect it after your computers untimely illness. :D
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Honestly I have no idea what's going on.
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~~ Thea is a daddy's girl, but she's a little fireball like her mother. Too bad she can't talk, though Leoben might rue the day he reuinited those two, regardless.
I never noticed before (blonde I guess) that Lee and Leoben are so close name-wise ... strange coincidence.
~~ The whole Leoben/Lee name similarity thing didn't hit me until I started writing this - and I'm not blonde..I was born blonde-maybe that counts. :D
I'm glad you were able to resurrect it after your computers untimely illness. ~~ Me too! It's not exact, obviously, but the basic components are there. And it's easier to concentrate, stitting in a quiet room with only the PC.
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
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