BSG FanFic: Rebellion, Chapter 8/?

Mar 17, 2007 17:45

Title: Rebellion, Chapter 8
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suffolkgirl March 18 2007, 11:12:12 UTC
Great chapter. Poor Kara, she's doesn't know which way is up. I like how subconsciously she remembers Lee and knows Thea is their daughter but can't quite process it. And I love how Thea knows Leoben isn't her dad. :)

But what has happened to Lee? Can't wait to find out...

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jatnj March 18 2007, 11:38:27 UTC
Ah yes. What happened to Lee? I don't know either. ;)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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ez_as_pi March 18 2007, 16:52:20 UTC
oh dear... (you are hurring with chapter 9, yes?)

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jatnj March 18 2007, 17:54:39 UTC
lol. I'm gonna try. :)

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jatnj March 18 2007, 22:44:06 UTC
Ahhh! Mystery solved. Thanks for letting us know.

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jatnj March 19 2007, 11:37:43 UTC
Leoben is having his fun with Kara and his little family. I think he thinks it's real and they'll all live happily ever after.

But, um... where is Lee? ~~ I don't know. He seems to have gotten away from me. I hate when that happens. ;)

I'm really glad you enjoyed this. As always, thanks for the feed back.

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fadingphantom March 19 2007, 06:02:10 UTC
oh god. *whimpers* I take it back. it can get worse. This is worse, much worse.

Leoben must be a damn good actor, for kara to read the hurt in his eyes and be made to feel guilty... and so cunning too because of course that way would work better on kara to get her to make an effort with "them", rather than sweet talking her or pressuring her. grrr!

The part where kara remembered The child of Starbuck and Apollo is a cylon... that was just chilling.

And that last part was just achingly sad and heart-wrenching, and brought tears to my eyes. What is there to say to that? It's too horrible for words, especially because even doped up on whatever as she is, it was technically voluntary and she is gonna feel so so guilty and violated if she ever comes out of this.
*meep*

That was a brilliant chapter, i think your best so far. Can't wait for the next one!

And I am friending you by the way, cos this story rocks!!!

xo

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jatnj March 19 2007, 11:30:13 UTC
I didn't want to spam you with replies so I'm gonna answer all of them here. I feel guilty when the first chapter implies that it's going to be a fluffy, L/K w/baby pic - and then it turns all evil and angsty. But I have to say, I enjoy the reactions. ;)

Sam sold out his friends to save his family. He honestly thought it would be a simple exchange but now Lee's gone and innocent people have died and I think he's realized his mistake. Deep down, he's a good guy.

I believe that Leoben believes that he wants and thinks he can have this 'marriage' with Kara and that Thea is his daughter. Even if Kara is becoming convinced that he's right, little Thea knows better.

I'm glad you're liking the story so far. Thanks for all the feedback, it's much appreciated. I friended you back! :)

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