Comments | jarakrisafis: Mini Fic: Murder Most Foul

jarakrisafis

Mini Fic: Murder Most Foul

Mar 08, 2012 12:41

Title: Murder Most Foul
Continuity: G1
Rating: PG
Character(s): Hoist, Ratchet, First Aid, Groove
Warnings: None
Summary: Hoist gets a shock when he walks in on Ratchet leaning over two energon covered frames...
Notes: Part of the Oath and Covenant AU. Series masterpost here

( Murder Most Foul )

c: hoist, c: groove, c: ratchet, c: first aid, series: oath and covenant au

Comments 5

__wilderness__ March 8 2012, 13:24:28 UTC

*snerk*

::Well, I taste quite nice.:: I'm sure you do Ratchet, I'm sure you do!

I don't think I've told you quite how much I'm loving all these little ficlets with Hoist and Ratchet and First Aid!

jarakrisafis March 8 2012, 13:53:20 UTC

It's a good thing Ratch kept that comment to the comms or Aid and Groove would have got some extra education me thinks :P

Thank you. :D I'm suffering from a really quite nasty cold at the moment so I'm once again confined to bed. Got any prompts? Ideas? Something you wanna see? No promises but I've run out of ideas :P

minibot_love March 8 2012, 20:09:26 UTC

Ahaha! So cuuuuuute! X3 They're such eensy lil bebes~~ <3<3<3

jarakrisafis March 8 2012, 20:17:54 UTC

Cute and devious and entirely innocent of all wrong doing...

rose0mary March 9 2012, 15:44:45 UTC

Cute.
Particualy the part about Hoist worrying about the younglings. Most fics don't focus on him, but since Hoist is a medic (I think, not the CMO or battlefield surgery), he would be protective about those under his charge. And any autobot or even a mech younger than him would fit that catagory.
GAUH!
The last line could be taken the wrong way - but it fits perfectly.
Besides, Ratchet commenting on the 'cookie' representing him is his personality, and ties in with Hoist wondering if the first attempt is safe to eat.
Yes Hoist, if Ratchet is eating his gift, they are good to go.
Cute.
First Aid, you don't know much, but at least you're having fun. That, and making a dessert for adult friends (or comrades, or others your guardian would miss, or a protector who would die for you, or ... let's stop there), is fun. Their expressions just as interesting.
Hmm, makes me wonder what First Aid and Groove were thinking/seeing when Hoist first saw the treat - and how they talked Ratchet into trying the very first one.