Hello, umm, first of all, thank you so much for sharing. I really really really loved it <3 It was so beautiful, just like your other writings. How could this beautiful piece only has one comment
Aw, please ;;; Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment! It means a lot to me ♥ I'm pretty sure that's what Peter Pan was written, so you can play with it in your mind! I'm really happy my story will have the honor to linger in yours <3
No don't cry! I hope you liked it anyway, and that I didn't make you too sad. Thank you for reading anyway, and for taking the time to comment, especially with such nice words ;;;;;; ♡ it means a lot to me!
Omg this squeeze my heart a lot ;; Idk if it's just me being sentimental but i got teary eyed upon words that normal people wouldn't even bat an eyelash xD This is so beautifully written i love it very much <3 Thanks for writing <3 Btw if you don't mind me asking, i don't get the "multiple character deaths" part? (I'm just slow xD) Is it the other boys in neverland?
I'm sorry for being so late but here i am <3 First of all, thank you for reading, and taking the time to comment, it means so much to me! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, although it's not as good as i wanted it to be but well.. the eternal struggle i guess ;;
As for the multiple character deaths, I'll explain to you <3 I'm a big fan of Peter Pan, and I didn't only make several allusion to the Wendy & Peter book, but also to the Kensington Gardens book, in which Peter (who leaves in the gardens) buries babies and children who get lost during the day and die during the night. (It's much prettier in the book i swear, i'm just lame) so I considered that the lost boys all died in their lives, and then ended up in Neverland when Jongin went to snatch them. Jongin is like the guardian of neverland, and he's like Death, but for kids. He takes their lost souls and takes them to Neverland :)
Their deaths are somehow mentioned in those lines:
“He looks like a Lost Boy who isn't lost,” Jongin snaps back at Junmyeon, annoyed
( ... )
Oh my! Thanks for explaining! See? I'm just THAT slow /sighs Now i read all those lines again, it totally makes sense :D Thanks again~ And hey, peterpan is a masterpiece but your story is a masterpiece too! It's your own story afterall :D
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It was so beautiful, just like your other writings. How could this beautiful piece only has one comment
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Your words are the kindest, I'm not sure I deserve them, but know that I truly appreciate them /blushes thank you so much for everything you said <3
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I'm pretty sure that's what Peter Pan was written, so you can play with it in your mind! I'm really happy my story will have the honor to linger in yours <3
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That was so beautiful. I love how surreal everything was. It is just like how I would imagine a child's mind to be like.
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece of work with us. Now excuse me while I go bawl my eyes out.
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No don't cry! I hope you liked it anyway, and that I didn't make you too sad. Thank you for reading anyway, and for taking the time to comment, especially with such nice words ;;;;;;
♡ it means a lot to me!
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Idk if it's just me being sentimental but i got teary eyed upon words that normal people wouldn't even bat an eyelash xD
This is so beautifully written i love it very much <3
Thanks for writing <3
Btw if you don't mind me asking, i don't get the "multiple character deaths" part? (I'm just slow xD)
Is it the other boys in neverland?
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First of all, thank you for reading, and taking the time to comment, it means so much to me! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, although it's not as good as i wanted it to be but well.. the eternal struggle i guess ;;
As for the multiple character deaths, I'll explain to you <3 I'm a big fan of Peter Pan, and I didn't only make several allusion to the Wendy & Peter book, but also to the Kensington Gardens book, in which Peter (who leaves in the gardens) buries babies and children who get lost during the day and die during the night. (It's much prettier in the book i swear, i'm just lame) so I considered that the lost boys all died in their lives, and then ended up in Neverland when Jongin went to snatch them. Jongin is like the guardian of neverland, and he's like Death, but for kids. He takes their lost souls and takes them to Neverland :)
Their deaths are somehow mentioned in those lines:
“He looks like a Lost Boy who isn't lost,” Jongin snaps back at Junmyeon, annoyed ( ... )
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See? I'm just THAT slow /sighs
Now i read all those lines again, it totally makes sense :D
Thanks again~
And hey, peterpan is a masterpiece but your story is a masterpiece too! It's your own story afterall :D
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