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Weird Feelings and Faded Memories

Apr 03, 2011 13:29

Title: Weird Feelings and Faded Memories
Pairing: Kevin/Kibum
Genre: Angst
Rating: R
Warning: Mentioned character death
Word count: 632
Summary: There is a weird feeling in the pit of Kevin's stomach and it won't go away.
A/N: This isn't one of my best works, and I'll admit it's a little rushed. I wrote this in 20 minutes and it's still lacking. And ( Read more... )

fandom: u-kiss, r: r, p: kibum/kevin, g: angst

Comments 5

yuie_ai April 3 2011, 11:30:05 UTC

such a heartbroken but lovely story...
kevin still waiting for kibum..
Y~Y

jannwoo_hoo April 4 2011, 13:10:50 UTC

It was heartbreaking to write ;-;

Thanks for reading, though (:

s2_otter April 3 2011, 11:43:15 UTC

Aww, sad for Black and White, but okay? :D
Take your time, we all know how school's horrid :(

But that aside, this was very pretty, descriptive and all, but I'm confused :(
So did Kibum's death actually happened before his eyes? Why-
Oh, was he in denial?
Ehhhhhh, did Kibum's death happen on that day, or days before but Kevin didn't forget the date or something and he went along, until he settle down and remember Kibum's dead?
Or did Kibum just die 0.0?
I'm so confused >_<

But at least there's so many possibilities :D
You don't have to answer them, it just shows that there's room for imagination <3 :D

Woah, great short read :D
Very thought-evoking :D <-- if that's a word.

jannwoo_hoo April 4 2011, 13:22:54 UTC

I know ;-; School doesn't give me any creative juice at all and it sucks :'/
I wish I could keep writing Black and White though. I miss writing it.

It did, and he is in denial D:
There was no specific day, I tried to be vague about it. It's one of those psychological mysteries where one's mind suppresses a traumatic event. When you do something familiar that's linked to the event, you know it's familiar, but you can't place it until it all comes crashing down on you. Selective amnesia or something like that, lol, I forgot everything I learned in psychology ;-;

This comment will probably just make you more confused so... LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

I'm glad you liked it anyway <3

s2_otter April 4 2011, 13:30:51 UTC

Gah! School :(
<3 I'll look forward to it :D

I get it :D Yep, happens a lot D:

Loved it, sweetie ^^ <3