fic, Lost: Temptation (Jacob/Boone), PG

[janie_tangerine]

This is me trying to catch up at least with the writing for the luau. Sorry for the spamming, I have at least two fics to post now and maybe I'll have more later tonight. Actually, I'm sure I'll have more, but bear with me.

Title: Temptation
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jacob/Boone
Words: 1753
Spoilers: up until the S5 finale, even if it's light stuff.

Comments

[bold_seer]

I really like your take on Jacob.

It isn’t like he’s making a deal with the devil or anything.

XD at the sly x-over reference.

That icon of yours is very pretty btw.

[janie_tangerine]

The icon is prettybutt's. ;)

Ha, much glad you liked it! IDK wtf is with me and writing Jacob this luau but he's fun. Sort of.

XD at the sly x-over reference.

*COUGH* Icouldn'tresistit *COUGH COUGH*

[aurilly]

Wow wow wow wow wow. This is amazing. Totally above and beyond the call of duty. And yeah, I'll confess that after reading the brilliance you did with Castiel/Jacob, I totally put the Boone/Jacob prompt in just for you. :)

Anyway, this was so gorgeous. I'd never thought about a pre-crash encounter through dreams, but this works beautifully. You manage to convey a really palpable sense of reaching---that Boone is reaching to try to understand the dream each time, and how it becomes more and mor emeantingful each time... and then also the feeling that he's cracking up for having these dreams. And I love how you compare it to that computer game, too. I don't know why.

“Did you ever wonder if fate had something in store for you?”
“Not really.”
This part was my favorite of the whole thing. Boone's always been my favorite character (after Sayid), so I always love him in any story, but I really love the way you've written Jacob here. SO SEXY! But also, wise and mystical and good and calm and all the things we saw on screen that made me

[janie_tangerine]

Boone's always been my favorite character (after Sayid)

LOOK AT THE COINCIDENCE, Sayid always was my favorite character after Boone. *high fives* And omg seriously, I didn't deserve such amazing fb. ♥ I'm so happy you liked it!

And HA, well, if it was there because I was supposed to catch the bait I'm much glad I did, but if you give Boone in the prompts you're tempting me already. ;)

I'm really happy that the concept worked for you, I kinda thought it could have been interesting that they'd meet pre-crash (and well, if the island demanded poor Boone there must have been a reason.. *glares*). And much glad that the Myst thing worked because I was wanting to compare it with Lost in fic for ages but I never got the occasion and I can kind of imagine Boone doing that. It's so awesome to hear you liked how I wrote Jacob, too! I have to say that I'm having fun with him lately, but he's such a good character. ♥ Thanks so much again and much glad you liked it!!

[elliotsmelliot]

Ahhh, so this is the real reason Boone was the sacrifice the island wanted. At least it was done partly with his own interest and blessing! Nice work!

[janie_tangerine]

Thank you! Ha, that was the first thing that came to me and it didn't want to go away, and I just couldn't resist the prompt. Much glad you liked it!

[janie_tangerine]

Oh God, you have a point about Locke. I hadn't thought about that but the option is... uh. Slightly creepy at least, but you do have a point. ;)

Much glad you liked it! And ha, poor dear, I just can't have enough of torturing him.

[janie_tangerine]

I sure as hell hope that if you have a Jacob-related destiny it ends up better for you! I'm really so happy this worked for you, I guess it was quite a stretch with the crazy whacked pairings thing but I just couldn't resist writing it when I see it. That's sooo a hot match, isn't it? I'm so glad that you liked it!

(PS, before I forget: I owe you a PM answer but I still didn't get to open it because I ended up swapped between RL and finishing an exchange fic *headdesk* sorry, I'll do that asap.)